rate_review Reviews

Wonderful, simple wonderful. A few minor errors but as they say no one is perfect. I simply love the concept of “Fire and Ice” Very creative and responsive. I especially like it at the beginning of each chapter that little blurb of information. Quit entrancing if I do say so myself. I can’t wait until you update, I think it is very adorable.

How ever, the only thing I think you should fix; you have to space out your sentences like when they talk have a separate line for them. It does make it a lot easier to read, plus it is a cheating way to make the chapters longer *snickers* I do that all the time.

It makes the chapter more neat and tidy and shows a bit more that you know what you’re doing. But, I can honestly say that you do know what you’re doing. As far as the reviews go. I know what it is like to be a first time writer. I used to be one and I really did suck at writing. Until I had gotten better; it just takes time.

You just have to grin and bear it. :) Just hope for the best and give it your all

Nice story I don't know what else to say I like the way things are going and well it would be nice if Anzu was there for someone to hurt her that would be the greatest ending , sorry for all Anzu lovers, if there are any , but she is annoying and besides I hate her anyway great story I would like to read the next chapter soon ^_^

awwww! I really hope Otigi and Handa can sort out there relentionship and Honda better friggin make up with Jounouce because I'll be very peeved *yells at screen* HONDA JOU GET IT TOGETHER!!! Ok I'm done XD!!

YAY!!! another fantastic chapter!! I love following this story it's got a great plot and everything!! ^_^

WOW!!!! I loved the lemon you write imensely well!!! I will be looking forward to your next chapter! WOW!!! And thanks for acknowledging me! ^_^ You rock!!

AAAAAHHH cliffie!!! It bet it was Seto..or wait NO Mokie!! Nah probally jou..it be really sweet if it was seto coming to make amends for his lovely puppy..aawww that would be so cute!! More please pwetty please!!

Great start!!! I really liked it!!! could you update soon please?

AHHHHHHH!!! cliffie!!! x,x why oh why must people leave me hanging!! This si a great and interesting look inot the minds of the two , my only problem is that the chapters are too short! u.u This is why I usually only read fic that have been completed first. So ^^ please next chapter!!?

*crys* u.u i wanna know what happends!! The scene with seto looking at mokie and jou just seemed so sweet in my head *insert floaty fluffy clouds and hearts*. Keep going! I must know more!

keep 'em comin'......when r they hooking up??????