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for Fire and Ice

by UrsurlaFretz

schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I hope the fire is enough to heat the ice.
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think the heat is melting them both. I wonder how long they will last as 'friends'.
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Jou is entirely too understanding and wonderful about protecting his friends.
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet story. I hope you did a sequel.
person ChibiRinni
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue? Uh, YES! How could you think not to!? Please continue! It would mean so much to us readers! Till next time, byee!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
person catti-dono
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I probably should have reviewed chapter per chapter but just sat down and ate it up....I see a big difference in your writing style...it has greatly improved but there is still a touch of POV as well...had a strange mental image of Yami screaming "Married"!....laughs....(Yuugi and Yami can shut down their mind link so that either cannot see or read the others mind...so no excuse...laughs...but I do see that you pretty much write J&S stories) catti
person DragonKiana
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH you must continue please...Jou and Seto are my fav pair in the whooole world...and I love your story..^^
person bywthedragon
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Please finish!
person dragon
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe oh well so ti was short ti was still good i do hope you continue with it even if its the end cause i like the story thus far so do get reviews adn continue
person dragon
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like your fic a lot so do continue with it i want to know what the surprise seto has for jou is as well as how this will end adn the side story too you got me interested in that as well so do continue with your story please