rate_review Reviews

Good chapter. I have been avoiding this one since I rally don't like what happened to Seto but I just had to review it.

Poor Yugi he is in even worse shape than Seto. Good chapter.

Good chapter. I like the story just not the start.

Good chapter. Poor Yugi and Seto.

Good chapter. I'm glad they are getting better.

Great story...I loved it and how the lemon was written was amazing...I will check out your sequel and well done :-)

Woof this is good, I can't say Ive been too keen on SetoxYugi pair but its done in such a way here to make a wad of sense, at least to my mind. It also works very well. I must admit when I began reading the twist and turns it took were not what I originally expected-for one thing I thought the whole keeping 'the' secret would last longer...but this is just fine. Is this finished or just nearly because it would be utterly unfair, cruel and disappointing to leave this one hanging...oh and the DBZ references do match...how odd?
There is perhaps one criticism that blatantly comes to mind in that while they were in character(or as much as the plot allowed) some of the speeches seemed strained -and not in a way that would fit with the story-they seemed in places to be overly descriptive and explaning too much.

this is the beginning of a new friendship for both of them or *evil grins* a deeper relationship than being friends. Ü

Ah...chapter 4 is doubled just thought you might know. And it was good such sweetness on Seto
s part to sleep with Yugi. ^^ Anyways Until you next update. XD

You're updating more quickly than most, and I like your other readers am very grateful. Each chapter has been quite moving; it is a delight to see Kaiba and Yugi helping each other to heal. I'm jealous that you're able to get Yu-Gi-Oh where you are, but happy that perhaps that will continue to inspire you to write more wonderful stories.