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wow, this is a great story. I love the characterization and the potential for complexity. Tomi is a great OC and i hope that it has a happy ending. I love your writing style too by the way.

ohhh, i'm interesting in where this story is turning! please keep up the good work

Well, I'm going to be honest, and say the first chapter turned me off a bit; I don't really like seeing Seto be cruel, but I read the rest anyway, and I'm glad I did! I really can't wait to see what happens next. Their relationship is taking a turn, and I really want Jou to get out of that lifestyle, somehow! And that funeral scene was really quite sad, with all his friends...
Looking forward to your next update!

i really like it so far!
but hey if seto dosent save joey i will die so please make it happy! cause then i will be happy!
poor joey

Oooh. That was fuckin' sexy! I loved it. Are you going to update soon?

I must say this is one hell of a story. Love the whole tea house concept. Lol it seems innocent and yet it is really a practice and business for men and woman will sexual appetites. The fact that it has my favorite pairing in it is also a plus.

I don’t particularly like that fact that Joeys father is gambling away all of Joeys money that he is making as a “whore” I suppose that is a little harsh word to call him. But, I don’t know what else to call him.

But; on the plus side it does go good with the story and actually give a reason why Joey is working in the “tea house”. You are very creative and I love this story so far. You actually managed to keep them in character too. Oh I just love stories that have the people in character.

I can’t wait until you update again. I am so excited to find out what happens. I really hope Joey’s father dies. That bastard doesn’t even care about him. I also love the rules of the tea house like.

1. Joey having to look at Seto while he fuck him
2. Joey is not aloud to come unless he begs
3. He isn’t aloud to look straight at Seto when they aren’t fucking

Things like that, again very creative. Sorry for my use of language. Anyways, great story I look forward to reading the next chapter. So, please don’t keep me and the other readers waiting.

Bi

wow... that kind of made me sad. I don't know what else to say so? update soon.

Do I love you or do I love you? I know I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so good! The new chpter is incredible! I just can't wait to read the rest of the story pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase update soon!!!!!

lol. I don't think kaiba will be happy when, not if, he finds out. I pity whoever he vents his anger on.. Hmm, he might not burst in anger to maintain his calm, cool, apathetic persona but regardless of his restraint I think he'll break if he sees how Tomoki acts towards Jou. In the end, Jou is going to be bitten on the butt for this.

Woohoo! You updated! I loved this chapter. I love this story. It's great. Please continue and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait to read more. This story is becoming a drug to me. PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!

Love,
Kitten