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Great story even if it was little bit difficult at first for me to catch your characters. They're living so in thier own world, ne?
Loved it till the end ^_^ above all when Jou was like a burger within it's bread (and hot as it too) LOL
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KeiEn

Lovely ending ^^ Glad it could work out.

Awww, I feel bad for Jou - Its like he's being rejected, not being good enough >.> I do like Tomi, but I feel so much for Jou, I really don't think he could really be happy with any of his options. I don't think he could be happy without Kaiba, and then he won't be happy if he abandoned Tomi added to the fact that Kaiba wouldn't be happy without them both, which would make Jou more unhappy, but then knowing you aren't enough for the person you love couldn't make Jou happy either - Then he could just leave them all, and then I'm not sure - probably again with the unhappiness. Bleh, but that's just my outlook of things at this moment. x.x So until the next.

Oh. My. God.... THAT WAS THE BEST STORY OF SETO BEING UKE THAT I'VE EVER READ!!! I was listening to Lisa Hall's "Is this real?" while reading this chapter and the setting and story went perfectly together with the music! I feel happy inside..... Please update soon!! Bye! N'cha!!

Wow. Just plain wow. This is easily one of the sexiest stories I have ever read- I shall place it at second, EVER. The characterisations are just plain tantalising. I've never been a particular fan of YuGiOh, especially not YGO smut, but hot damn. You are an absolutely fantastic writer, and I shall be keeping an eye on this story to see where it goes in the future. I do so hope that you will be updating, because you've got me hooked!

Goddamn...the imagery of Tomoki, slinking across the floor to Jou. I can't get enough of it. This story had me drooling the whole way through.

omg. That was wonderful. you're incredible. I can't wait for the next installment!

I love the plot it kinda reminds me of "Memoirs of a gaisha" though.. but thats a good thing cause i like that book.... anyway good work !!

VII

gah! i hope things don't get too bad! that was so sweet what seto said to jou at the end ^^

WOW...I love this story!!! Pet stories are just the cutest *squee*!!! Please update soon. I wanna see what happens between Jou, Kaiba and Tomi. Will there be a threesome or is Kaiba too posessive? I reviewed, so please write more!!! Byebye

Awesome.... I like it. Alot. Update as soon as you can, meow. Bye! N'cha!!