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September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeahhhhhhhhh. I was really pleased with the ending. I'm gonna have to read it again for clarification, but it was a little weird. Toni didn't really end up having a back story, so even though he was there the whole time, it seemed almost like he was just another person hanging around. Like Haha. IDK. It would be interesting to see the dynamics of a threesome work out in a relationship. If you ever want to expand his character, I would definitely want to read it.
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As a rule, I really really hate first person stories. But since I liked your other stories, I decided to keep reading. Once I got over my prejudice, I found that I really liked the story, though it made me a little miserable to see Jou in such an unhappy position. *Is counting on feelgood ending but knows that sometimes that JUST DOESN'T HAPPEN. D:*
Anyways, there was something haunting about this first chapter, and I like seeing that.
Anyways, there was something haunting about this first chapter, and I like seeing that.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. The plot was very well thought out, very thorough. I really liked the thought of Joey being in a teahouse instead of just a regular prostitute, it gives a lot more to work with it seems.
I don't usually like OCs, but I really did enjoy Tomi. I think you did a wonderful job writing this and I love the unique take you took on things.
I don't usually like OCs, but I really did enjoy Tomi. I think you did a wonderful job writing this and I love the unique take you took on things.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...
um, a bit disturbed but definately real in this day and age. ppl are nuts, so great job.
it was very good, i really got into it.
again, great job!
um, a bit disturbed but definately real in this day and age. ppl are nuts, so great job.
it was very good, i really got into it.
again, great job!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story! So touching!
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to pop in and tell you that you’re a god and I worship you. All of your fics are amazing, and I wish I had just a fraction of the talent you possess. You and just a few other authors make the YGO fandom worth reading anymore. Thank you for taking the time and entertaining us with your works.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uhm. ugh. this had the potential to be so very good, but tomoki made it all go to shit. :< OCs that are major are blahgh. this is so well written, too. a shame.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!!! Kinda had me worried there for a sec though when Jou regected Kai.....but its all ok in the end!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah...really good story. Different from the others by sheer finnesse. You had me up late. XD
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! I liked the ending. Very nice, very nice. Although I can't help but be sad that it's over! *sniffle* Amazing intrigue.