AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for My Immortal

by ShadowedRaven

person YamiKuro
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I want to read more, please post more!!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it and am looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like it! its really, really, really good! please update soon! Ryou is my favorite! he's just so damn kawaii!
person Llonella
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought you had stopped updating this story and wanted so much to see what would happen next in the rewrite. I love the fact that you are not keeping up with the same old pairing of Seto and Jou as I love Seto and Tristan together.

Please do not keep us waiting again for a whole year for another update.
person deathmoon20
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for the next chap i hope we get to meet the young five boys other half since i know they r going to have a big part in this lovly blood and lustful story ^_^ later
person Luna
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow very nice story,want to read more!!! please update! ^^
person yaoi-lover
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person Nobodynow
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It was really good! Great job, and you better update soon or I'll die of anticipation! Of course I'll get to see it before everyone else so I don't have room to complain but I'm voicing the thoughts of everyone here. I'm really pleased at the final product and can't wait to see it through to the end.

Thank You.
DK ;)
person Llonella
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read the orignal one and the beginning of this one is already better than than that. The characters are more defined and there is more of a plot.

I so want to read the other chapters so don't keep us waiting as long as you used to with the previous story. I want to see what happens next.
person lokivsanubis
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more. Update soon!