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for Hardball

by akuchan

schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I cannot tell you how many times I have come back to this story! If something captures my attention THAT much it's well worth a review - the first time I read it, I wanted to review but had to get up early and would have rambled and mused for probably a good hour or two on how to get my adoration across! (As if I'm not rambling NOW!)

It's brilliant! Well-written and hot as all fuck - seriously. It's nice to see someone write the fetish so well! I absolutely love this! You deserve a round of applause for making me - a hardened veteran - quite hot under the collar! Wonderful writing! :D
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to review this last chap. Having internet issues. *sigh*

Up to my expectation? OH My Gods!!!

Fabulous, Marvelous, Exceptional.

Write more!!! Please!!
person charredremains
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That story made me squirm. I can't believe I'm admitting it, but I covered my eyes during part of it before I could continue reading. Ahaha few stories have accomplished that with me, so I say job well done.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so very kinky *grins* I'm loving this >=D
person Amari-kun
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O How could you leave it there? Hope to read the next chapter soon.
person m0vi3ang3l
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. what an interesting story. i'm excited! Please continue soon!
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting approach. Something tells me this is more than a simple fisting story. I am anticipating something very yummy.
Please continue.
I'll be watching.