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Hehhehheh, so what did Mariku and Bakura do now? Figures they get a bunch of cops after them, on Malik's motorcycle. Meh...crude and badass. Perfect character portrayals. All the yamis for that matter. Heh, them and their drugs. :P

Anyways, love how Ryou has so much control over Bakura in the office, sort of. He hangs out with Yami? Pfft, whatever. Interesting ch, and I'm looking forward to more. See ya. ^_~

Shit That Ws Fucking Good!! You write some seriously good stuff. i really like this chapter. Marik And Bakura r such druggies. not to mention Yami. THEIR SO BAD!!! I LUV BAD BOYS!!! me luv this fic Very much. very very much.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

I think my favorite line in this chapter was Bakura denying he was Jesus... that was just TOO funny and wholly absurd on so many levels! I really like your dialogue between the characters. I think you have really nailed Bakura. He's rude, crude, and socially unacceptable. And, he really does expect sex at the drop of a hat from Ryou, doesn't he? I liked the flash of violence there in the office when he wasn't granted instant gratification. Kudos to Ryou for not just bending over and taking it. Marik's character is equally well written. I am really dying to know what the hell Bakura and Marik did to cause the cops to chase them this time... Nice chapter!

Hmm, not bad, quite inriguing in fact. I like how the portray the relationship between Ryou and Bakura; it is so mutual and just sex. A bit disturbing, but I do look forward to how you'll have them end up. And of course, I'm enjoying your character portrayal of Bakura and Mariku as well as Ryou.

Heh, Yami gets beat up by Bakura, well he deserves it for pissing him off. Wonder what he was doing there anyways. An interesting read. I look forward to the next ch. See ya. ^_~

YES!!!! YAMI FINALLY GOT WHAT HE DESERVED GOD THAT BASTARD HE THINKS HE'S SO COOL!!! "I'm the King of Games Blah Blah I will mind crush you Blah Blah!" That idiot really needs to SHUT UP!!! And I thought Anzu was bad yeesh! I tell you want though if Bakura made theiving a game Bakkura would win, I would bet it on my Pokemon and Yu-Gi-Oh cards!! And I'll tell you why NO ONE BEATS BAKURA AT THAT BECAUSE HE OBVOIUSLY smarter sexier and way cooler than than Yami, "Must believe in friends blah fuckin' blah!" I SAY SHUT THE FUCK UP!!! Don't get me wrong Yami is hott and everything but come on...He does tend to tred on thin ice...idiot...anyway that's enough ranting...oh yea I do like Yami, he just pisses me off every now and again xD!! So yea...update soon!!

TMDkins! Glad to c ur actually posting again. I liked this a lot. Im ithcing to c how u make Bakura and Ryou end up together after the "abuse". Let me no when ur ready to post the next chap so I can c it be4 u do.
----Always, the Criyer----

I have to say that I enjoy your Bakura characterization. He's just too damn ruthless and unintentionally funny that he's endearing in a very sick and demented sort of way. Even though I am not much into the drug/drinking aspect of the story (and you did forewarn!) I was intrigued enough to check out your story since I am a sucker for Ryou and Bakura fics. Bakura's interaction with Marik was priceless. I love fictions where those two are just pure badasses and not afraid to flaunt it. Ryou is a workaholic in this fic and it is believable. The fact that Bakura at the moment uses Ryou strictly for sex and Ryou allows it to happen is disturbing but obviously vital to your plot. I loved the part where Bakura just beat the ever-loving shit out of Yami! I take it Yami has a thing for Ryou? Is that part of the reason for the beating perhaps? And now Bakura is stalking Ryou to the office for another piece of ass because he's bored... Nice Bakura! That's real classy! ; ) Good start to the story. I like your writing style. I look forward to reading more and how you plan on having Ryou and Bakura both discover they have a mutual affection for the other...

DAMN!!! this story's fucking great! i luv it! sex drugs and rock n' roll. that's all a good ol' story wit bakura,ryou and marik in it needs!! i can't wait for the next chapter.