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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I didn't comment on this story when I was reading some of your others. Maybe because I stopped to think about love being a social disease and forgot all about it. I'm old enough to remember a Bon Jovi song that said that, but the song has nothing to do with this.
I don't know, I really, really liked this, Joey's witty remarks had me laughing my brains off the whole time. Kaiba destroying people was also very fun to see, and strikingly in character. The lemon, oh don't get me started on the lemon. That was... that was... I don't know, hotnessMchothot. Yeah. And well, it seems they've been going at it for some time now and Joey wants more but never in a million years would suggest anything. And who's to say it isn't exactly what Kaiba is waiting for? Probably not since he's an asshole, but I read too much between the lines I guess. The Ramones comment, the "Everything that interests me at the moment is right here in bed with me." thing. Too bad he is... you guessed, too much of an asshole. So yeah, it won't probably ever change.
I wonder though, what he thought of Joey's double meaning comment and the rose. Guess we'll never know...
I don't know, I really, really liked this, Joey's witty remarks had me laughing my brains off the whole time. Kaiba destroying people was also very fun to see, and strikingly in character. The lemon, oh don't get me started on the lemon. That was... that was... I don't know, hotnessMchothot. Yeah. And well, it seems they've been going at it for some time now and Joey wants more but never in a million years would suggest anything. And who's to say it isn't exactly what Kaiba is waiting for? Probably not since he's an asshole, but I read too much between the lines I guess. The Ramones comment, the "Everything that interests me at the moment is right here in bed with me." thing. Too bad he is... you guessed, too much of an asshole. So yeah, it won't probably ever change.
I wonder though, what he thought of Joey's double meaning comment and the rose. Guess we'll never know...
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit I just realized you commented on my story in ff.net O_O I don't usually use emoticons on comments, so this should count for something. Um, thanks again by the way.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kind of cool, kin dof weird, definitely funny and probably the best valentine's day fic I've ever read. XD
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha :p
Loved all the descriptions, with Joeys comments, of Kaiba turning everyone down XD
I'd love to know how they even started this arrangement, sleeping with each other on Valentines Day..
"Love is a social decease" .. Maybe I should start using that? Certainly has a ring to it..
Loved all the descriptions, with Joeys comments, of Kaiba turning everyone down XD
I'd love to know how they even started this arrangement, sleeping with each other on Valentines Day..
"Love is a social decease" .. Maybe I should start using that? Certainly has a ring to it..
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not quite sure what to say... I definitely think Kaiba's in denial though.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is easily, hands down, without a doubt, one of the best Seto/Jou stories I have ever come across? Why? Because they fight it and fight it and don't give in, even when this story reached its end. You did an awesome job explaining the boundries of their relationship without really having to go into depth about it and all the little fiascos at school were extremely entertaining to read. I'm definitely glad I took the time to click this story's link ^_^
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm... I really don't mean to sound rude... but your story left me feeling... empty. I felt that it was rather well written, but Jou's show of care and the sudden "happy" bolting out of the room set the story on a tilt for me... like it didn't add up or something. I'm sorry, I'm not trying to sound like I'm giving a bad review, but I'm giving my honest opinion. I'm always up for happy endings over sad, but this ending was neither, just empty... maybe it's just me, but that's what I thought on it. Sorry if it isn't what you wanna hear. It was a good story though, just the ending... for me... at least...
~ChibiRinni '.';;
~ChibiRinni '.';;