AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Deception's Dance

by Wicabeth

person Anna
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You write the best stories. Please update soon.
person Arainaina
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh very good please update soon
person Cherrychik
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*hands you some painkillers* That should help you a little, right? Anyhoozles, I love this story!! Please update when you're feeling up to it. (If you push too fast, you'll end up in a hospital and no one wants that!)
person fyrbyrd
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm really enjoying this. Hope you feel better soon, can;t wait to read more.
person Camille
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was good! I am waiting for more. How the heck did you get a kidney infection? Hope that you fight it off with a vengence, and while you're at it, tell BF to buzz off!
person Darleneartist
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi I liked this story very much.
your first chapter shows such promise and I am looking to see what will happen next. I like y/yy very much. I think the couple is very sweet together.
Bye for the now.
person Abstract Sora
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I always love your works, and this one isn't any different. I was wondering what happened to Yuugi when you kept calling him 'she' throughout the first chapter but now, I understand. I hope to read more of this, and XX Factor II. Keep up the good work.
person Camille
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a cool story! Continue!
person Draghaii_Atemu
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grr, cliffhanger! But this story's looking very interesting so far, keep it up! ^^
person Mystic maiden18
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
way cool