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for Deception's Dance

by Wicabeth

person Neptune
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals with delight* I'm liking this already!
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was nice, I would certanly like more!
person Kitsune
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. well done. Well written. Please continue. Oh is Bakura gonna show up? The king of thieves.
Ja Ne
person Kouseketra
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An amazing tale! You're writing style is so poetic, it really puts you in Ancient Egypt with beloeved Atem! I truly enjoyed it.
person tavi
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of god, please continue! This story is so cool.
person YunaAtemu
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can you please up date soon
person Silas
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE! Oh for the love of God! Please write more! Your words have captivated me and hold me prisoner, and I can not seem to want to stop reading! I loved it and hope that you grant me my wish and continue this story of love and exotic times! *Kisses and licks and everything in between!*
person Fire_Atemu (Draghaii_Atemu)
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I love the dialogue between Atemu and Yugi, it's so well written! *Waits with a Yugi plushie* ^-^
person LaZy^SnAkE
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa!!! That was so fua fua.
I love the way Atemu and Yugi interact.
I also love how you pair up Jou and Seto <---my fav pairing.
I can't wait to read more.
Good job. ^_^
person Anna
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You write the best stories. Please update soon.

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