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oh my god, this pairing makes me die. i find them both pretty much revolting sexually, and yet, i love this story. pegasus makes me laugh especially him telling his mother he was getting ready to "do it" lmao.

thank you for making my day, my week, my year!

Well, you need a beta. And this is really very AU, which was surprising, since that wasn't mentioned in the story description. And the only reason I bother mentioning either of these things is because this is a really enjoyable little fic, nice erotic tone, IC for both Pegasus and Keith (well, if you put aside basically all of the canon storyline, of course, and change everyone's ages), and just those couple small changes would make it so much better. I'll make a point of reading your other fics now. You'll write more Keith/Pegasus, of course?