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Ah, Hi! *Blush* I've loved your writing for quite some time but have always ended up just hiding in the background rather than reviewing, its just that you are such an amazing writer. However I have finally managed to review. *Smile* So forgive me for not reviewing for a while, please?! *Puppy eyes*

I love this story, but I am afraid that I have got a certain fondness for Set growing. I don't know why but he just seems to be an okay guy and he really does care about Ryou...I don't want to see the God hurt but I also don't want to see Ryou seperated from Bakura. *Sob* How do I choose? I guess I will have to eventually go with Bakura, after all he is the other half of Ryou techincally.

I also should tell you how much I adore Ahmose...I mean he is such a sweetie. I love him in 'I dream of Ryou' but I'll comment on that in the right place. Initially I was put off but the OC, I'm not really one for them but Ahmose has managed to worm into a special place into my heart where I now wonder where he is in other Yugioh fanfic's *laugh* On that note I do have to ask a couple a questions if I'm not being too nosey...I've read whats so far been posted of Ahmose's story but I don't think that it was finished? I'm not certain though...if not are you going to finish? Oh and I've looked for 'Mellenium Balance' which I think you mentioned was the sequel to 'Koibito Yami' but I can't find if its posted. Am I being really blonde and missing it or isn't it up anywhere yet?

Anyway urm thats all from me now. *Grin*

Nice picture of "The Girls"! ; ) The Ryou genie was technically happy... his soul living a new life free from servitude and beatings... now he is miserable again... As is everyone else, I do believe, until Marik gets his genie back...

Well, let's try this again! Obviously I reviewed the wrong story above! DOH! Feel free to delete, dear... sorry... Now, on to the correct review for the correct story... This chapter was disturbing to me. (I seem to be using that word a lot lately with your stories - disturbing...) Ryou was all over Set and that was what happened to be disturbing - to me anyway. Maybe we are not privy to a behind-the-scenes look at what Ryou is REALLY feeling or thinking but still... Once again, well written... but... disturbing. Now that Bakura knows where Ryou is and how he got there is Ryou's "Dad" safe? How will he get his Ryou-kins back? Until next time on "As the Slave Turns..." ; )

You are just the worst at making owners that you like but still don't want Ryou to end up with.... Couldn't Set just add Bakura in a threesome? Ah, I even know the answer to that one...

I'm in love with this story!!! but, you haven't been updating this story as much as the Jungle or I Dream of Ryou. I love those too, but is my absolute favorite ^^ please update soon?? it's such a wonderful story!!

ummm... I noticed that your other fics are updating and I really don't mind but... what about this one... I really like this fic and it has yet to be updated. I hope that I am not missing something... errr... sorry if this is bothering you but I am waiting and really want to read chapter 12 to see what the pic has to do with the fic... so could you PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Bunnie

This story is wonderful. I hope something really bad happens to poor Ryou's dad! Oh, and cookies are given for updates.... :) *hint,hint*

My god, I thought I was going to go crazy with the suspense knowing that Yami was going to be at the banquet and finally find out where Ryou went. Now it is the matter of rescuing Ryou-kun, go Bakura-sama! Kick some ass!

Damn bastard of a father!!! What kind of father would sell his son for the sake of seeing him unhappy when Ryou did nothing to him?! He needs some serious therapy with his warped up logic and mind there. *huggles Ryou-kun*

And Set the God of Destruction is an interesting character. He can be nice, but he's possessive, and he can still be pretty evil. Well, the lemon in the last ch was, I have to admit, pretty hot. But you would think that knowing he has a yami and that Ryou is a hikari, he would let him go since they -are- two halves of a soul. But apparently it's not that simple.

Anyways, I'm loving the story very much indeed. ^^ *sigh* I miss reading your stories and I'm really glad you're not leaving. ^_^ I love your creative ideas, evil, angsty, but still so alluring. Lovely writing. I can't wait til the next ch. And I shall be reading more of your 'new' stories. See ya. ^_~

great chapter! i was reviewing your stories under Ruri_Star for awhile but i finally was able to get a account and my pen name is Crimson_Rose18!!! yay for me!!! i loved this chapter now i just need to know if bukura gets feeling better or not! only something you can answers so until the next chapter! bye...

*Does a little victory dance* Go Hato!!! I love your stories!!! Please continue...... I"ll read and review as much as I can. Um...... I feel really bad for Ryou though poor little guy.... Please continue though!!!