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for Slave of Destruction

by hatochiisai

person Killer Fire Fox
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it so much! Please update soon!
person Jeda
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O HELLS NO!!! HELLS FUCKING NO!!! NOW I KNO RYOU *IS* GONNA LEAVE WITH THEM IF THEY COME AND GET HIM!!! HE NEEDS 2 GET-HIS-MAN!! HE HAS NO CHOICE IN THE MATTER!! but then agian you're writing the fic and it's your coice right? *sighs* man i cryed a lot during this fic and frankly, my eyes hurt. i feel sorry 4 bakura, i hate set(sometimes), and i LOATH yaten. As 4 ryou...i feel like slapping him across the head and asking him if he's 4getting somthing or SOME1!! Hey if ryou enjoys getting screwed by some whose face looks like that of a jackass then fine i'll take bakura and screw him myself. HA!! neway i hope that ryou's under some evil spell from set cause i'm about 2 slap a bitch. don't worry i'm not angry at u i'm angry at ryou. and if he stops by while you're reading this review tell me if he crys so i can laugh. o and great fic i really like it even though RYOU'S GETTIN ME PISSED!! few people can write angst that makes me cry. can't wait 4 your next update!!

Much love from NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person Switch
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm lovely stuff... I'm sorry this took so long for me to get to. I've been absent from my mind as of late... someting odd is going on here. nobodys sleeping emotions and mood swings are at an all time high and I've had my hands full with enough teenaged angst in the past few weeks to drown in.
person lokivsanubis
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bakura better slap some sense into Ryou quickly because this 'I'm loving Seth thing is getting to become a very interesting relationship. Pluse Ryou's acting like a whore big time! Bakura hurry up and save Ryou already. (Bakura appears and shrugs his shoulders. "Maybe after the next commercial or something. Do we have anymore soda? Ryou go buy me some soda!") ("Dude Ryou's not here remember?" Marik) ("Crap now i have to go save his sorry self! Why do i have to love soda so much?)(Come on, Kurah you don't just love him cuz he buys you soda do you?") (...)
person lokivsanubis
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bakura better slap some sense into Ryou quickly because this 'I'm loving Seth thing is getting to become a very interesting relationship. Pluse Ryou's acting like a whore big time! Bakura hurry up and save Ryou already. (Bakura appears and shrugs his shoulders. "Maybe after the next commercial or something. Do we have anymore soda? Ryou go buy me some soda!") ("Dude Ryou's not here remember?" Marik) ("Crap now i have to go save his sorry self! Why do i have to love soda so much?)(Come on, Kurah you don't just love him cuz he buys you soda do you?") (...)=D
person Shadow Mistress
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot another update! hehe. ^^ Mhmm, another intriguing ch. Ryou is quite loyal to his master I see, of course that's reasonable to an extent, but that's also a bit - er more than a bit - depressing for Bakura. Poor Baku. *huggles* Unless...Ryou is just putting up a front. ^^

This is proven to be a complicated dilemma indeed. Set is a good character; he has a good characterization and all and he definitely cares for Ryou a lot. And the beautiful way you write it, I feel a sort of attachment to his relationship w/ Ryou-kun. Somehow this is going to end up in some sort of heart break, assuming Ryou only goes with one love and that he ever gets back to Bakura.

Ugh, it's all Yaten's fault! Bakura needs to go beat him up sometime soon. lol. Can't wait to see how all this is sorted, looking forward to the next ch. See ya. ^_~

person Crimson_Rose18
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter yet again! *bows* you are amazing thinks for the up date!
person K.C
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *CRYING* RYOU"S UNDER A SPELL!!!!!!!! PLZ SAY HE"S UNDER A SPELL!!! *sobs in the corner* He love's Bakura right!?!?! How could he just forget about Bakura like that!! *crys some more* Plz say they get back together before I die of sadness
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH EGAD! T-T poor ry ry broken so early. ^^ tee hee, he'll leave as soon as he see's bakura, or perhaps are you hiding that Set just have Bakura as a slave as well?
person ayachan
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you against threesomes? because the only way i can see this working out is to have a threesome of some kind -_- *sigh* poor bakura- go and beat yaten!