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for Slave of Destruction

by hatochiisai

person lokivsanubis
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking this story more and more. But will Bakura becoming back anytime soon? Does he even know where Ryou is? Will he come for Ryou? Well anyway I like this stroy update soon.
person itavita
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I like this story so far. ^^ I just have a hard time picturing Set with a human slave...thing. (What with his dog/donkey head and all) Just a bit...freaky. o.o

Continue soon. :p Really interested in seeing what happens next.
person sglily
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A defiant Ryou is a sexy Ryou! Goooooooo Ryou! But damn it! Where the hell is Bakura? Does Bakura even notice that Ryou is missing? Does Bakura even care? Get off your sexy duff, Bakura and look for your Ryou muffin, damn it! Set has one hell of a way of getting his point across, eh? Nice chapter... well, well written chapter that is... not a good chapter for Ryou.
person sglily
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ryou and Bakura just can't be happy, can they? And here it is Daddy playing the Big Bad... Bastard... selling his son into slavery because he hates Bakura. Well, I can't wait until Bakura finds out what happened to his Ryou muffin so he can go medivel on Daddy's ass. I'm interested in seeing what happens next...
person ayachan
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooo ;o; i'm not a big bakura/ryou fan, but this is just too horrible!!!! *tosses jono/jou at set and hopes that set is distracted while aya steals ryou away* man, and i don't like the ominous title of your next chapter o_O i'm kind of scared for ryou T^T.. anyway, i like it! so good luck and keep up the good work
person Dara
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou. I have like Ryou father i "Koibito Yami" and now? Please make Bakura help Ryou. Ok?
person Tenshi
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou life for him just well. . .it just sucks half the time
But I think I'll definitly like this! It looks like it's going to be really good.
person lokivsanubis
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this new story. I feel bad for Ryou though. Talk about betrayal and poor Kura. can't wait to read more.
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I liked it. Very sad for poor little Ryou. He doesn’t seem to have very good luck in this series.
Too bad his father turned out to be an ass. He started out so nice in ‘Kiobito Yami’. Now I just want to see
Bakura disembowel him or something. How could he do that to his own son! I rely doubt his wife’s gonna be
too happy about this.

Well, good opening chapter. Can’t wait to see where this is going.
person Draghaii_Atemu
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Aw, poor Ryou. Great start, I love it so far! ^^