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for Slave of Destruction

by hatochiisai

person lokivsanubis
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm saddened. Poor Ryou was broken and he no longer has freedom. I hope Bakura saves him soon. I love the story. Update soon. it's very good.
person Tenshi
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just the chapter title for the next chapter is depressing.
But I'm still looking forward to it.
I'm such a sadist some time.
Really enjoying and loving this story so far.
person itavita
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xD Glad you're excited about Fate. Keeps me writing. >.>;

I luffles this chapter! Poor, poor, sexy little Ryou. His yumminess has turned against him. *cuddles him*

I'm glad this'll have a happy ending, but I'm worried for Ryou anyway. It'll probably be pretty rocky until he reaches that point of happiness. ^^;
person sglily
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, dear Lord! What the hell was that? Well, as if it wasn't expected. Brutual, nasty, and sad all at once. Bakura, damn it! Quit playing with yourself and find your Ryou muffin! He needs you! Of COURSE I know you/your stories and your damn angst! I just love harrassing the crap out of you! ; )
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy i finally got to see Bakura again even if he is crying like a baby. I'm just happy Ryou hasn't forgotten about him. Will Set go out and find Bakura now too and make him a slave? Has Ryou's dad even told his wife yet or what? And how much more and Ryou possibly take even though he will break in the next chapter? UPdate soon. I like this story.
person ruri_star
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story love it and keep it up!!!
person sglily
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, you made it clear that Bakura at least NOTICED that Ryou was missing... ; ) Another semi-ugly chapter for poor Ryou. Why is it with all of your (fine) damn stories that I find myself PLEADING with you to not hurt the Ryou fill-in-the-blank and to make him happy, hm? ; ) I'm not so sure I want to read the next chapter... it doesn't bode well for the Ryou slave... You also made me hungry, thank you very much with the crab-stuffed mushrooms and soup... And hey, since Ryou is marked wouldn't that mean that he was already "owned/claimed" by someone else? Damn Ryou's father! Gouge out his eyes with a plastic SPORK! Um... yeah...
person itavita
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snuggles Ryou* He misses his Bakura so much. ;-; I can tell he's not going back anytime soon, though. Set obviously wants to molest his sexy pale ass. xD

Anywho, I'm cringing thinking about what's in store for Ryou. :( Poor guy.
person Switch
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know I really envy you your ability to write on such a constant basis. and finding a writer who can actually make me physically upset is hard... youve done it. so congradulations. I want to commend you on your work and tell you how much I've enjoyed it (and yes I do admit to reading as much as I chould.) I appologise for only saying something now but I find it hard to say the right words sometimes and try to make up for it when I can. so thank you for entertaining me with your lovely works, keept it up and have fun with it. talent such as yours should not be wasted. thank you agian.

~Mistressswitch
person ruri_star
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's so OHMYGOODNESS! how could you write that! i wouldn't of been able to do that! you're amazing!!! up date!