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for Slave of Destruction

by hatochiisai

person Nashwa
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a cruel, cruel mistress. ;_; *huggles Ryou*
person ruri_star
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story i love the only thing i don't like is there's no fluff!!! * sighs* well...you can't have everything... great chapter keep up the good work and i hope your writing block disappears fast!
person Tenshi
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I could go for a Ryou given massage.
Good chapter. Enjoyed reading it, curious as to what the to were arguing about.
person sglily
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems that Set has a soft spot for the little Ryou slave... that could be good... that could be bad. I think my favorite part was when Ryou climbed the tree and was - as Set had reasoned - more than likely thinking of Bakura and wanting nothing better than to be free once again by his lover's side...
person yunasgrace
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i noticed this before, in chapter 3 you mention about the mark that bakura gave ryou at christmas in Koibito Yami. i was wondering if this story is supposed to be linked in some way and if so i was wondering why ryou's dad hates bakura so much now as in Koibito Yami he seemed fine with bakura in the ned.
im sry if i seem a bit nitpicky but its just my curiousity gettin the better of me ... so plz forgive me ^^"
another great chapter and i cant wait forthe next chapter to be posted

yunasgrace
person itavita
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can already tell Set wants some of that coveted Ryou ass. ^.- I can safely assume Ryou's in for a rough ride.
person Switch
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol... ok seriously now I cant stop laughing. shit that sounded like something I whould have said. no you did not make me sick... but I find myself crying agian not because of the story this time (although that wasent very nice) but because im laughing so hard. good stuff by the way. I had just enough time to read an review this before I had to leave and now im happy instead of being uptight and sulky... thank you for changeing my mood today.
person Tenshi
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou-chan.
Raping Royu certianly didn't win Set any browniy points int the poor boys opinion.
I keep thinking Yami should be able to do a little more.
I mean he was a pharoah and favourite fo the gods.
Well you know when/if they find out where Ryou is.
Poor, poor Ryou.
person ruri_star
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad! por ryou....ok anyway...Great chapter! keep up with the greatness!!!
person Nashwa
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou! ;_; That chapter had me sniffling a bit. Please say Bakura's gonna come to the rescue soon!

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