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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds great so far and off to a great start. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I hope Ryou n Bakura n Malik n Marik work out their differences so they can get together. Yami... er... Atemu, seems to already like Yugi. ^_^ Keep up the great work n hope to see you soon in the next chapter. Byee!
~ChibiRinni ^.~
~ChibiRinni ^.~
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. Please continue
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you've got me interested. My only complaint is that you randomly switched into the present tense at the end of chapter one. Just watch your tenses :D Otherwise, rock on with ya bad self ;D
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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoo! keep going!
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May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning!!! I'd love to read more on it!!!