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I like it I absolutely do please don’t leave it uncompleted please I really thinks it’s great ^_^
good luck.

HMMMMMMMMMMM, this helps. could use more chapters, but it helps. (i may have gotten myself into trouble with this fic, what with how complicated it is. >.< writing yami as a sex slave to peggy, the befores, and the afters are going to be a pain.) >.<' yeeeehhhhhhhhh, damn homework, i barely know where to do my research! ^______^ but it should be fun!

O_o Wow! That was great. I feel it could have used a little more description near the end, but the whole thing...wow. I love the idea of a Pegasus/Yami fic. Great job. :D