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by ChapelierLievre

schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uhm, Hawt... LOL

English isn't you're native tongue? You're kidding me, you did really well.

I was a bit confused as 1st because I though Malik was naive in the ways of sex. lol Marik and he do things? lol

So, when will you continue to make more?? Maybe the four can work something out. lol

schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, your PWP actually had more of a story line than the so called fic I read yesterday. Great lemon!! :)
person apogee
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD...I'm giving you the thumbs up right now...that was HOT!!!
person BakuraXMalikNum1Fan
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot. I hope u do continue it. Loooooooooooooooooooooove for u for ur yummy lemon!