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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is just to cute! It's great! Five stars 4 U!!!!!!!!!! Ryou's just so cute when he doesn't have a clue. Update soon so we can all find out what happens with Ryou and Marik. And when is Malik and Bakura gonna find out about Marik's little genie? Chow!
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May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God! You girls certainly know how to lead us readers along and KAZAM! "What does fuck mean?" Good Lord! Too funny! Actually, I laughed harder at Marik's reply - "What I'd like to do to you..." Good one! And whew, Ryou is a persistent little shit, isn't he? Come on, Marik! "Rise" to the occasion, Big Boy! Show ole' Ryou what fucking is all about! You teases! You aren't going to actually have them "do it" either, are you? ; ) Nice chapter!
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute. I heart it *hearts*
Can't wait to see what's going to happen with it!
Luffles the story!
Can't wait to see what's going to happen with it!
Luffles the story!
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol thaqt was hilarous. you got the characters perfectly and the storyline so far is wonderful. I would greatly appreciate an update.
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ryou is so cute! I'm glad that Marik is being so kind to him... I liked Marik's reaction to Ryou bursting out of the bottle... I could actually see him diving across the bed and hiding on the other side of the mattress! Too funny! Already these two seem like the perfect pair. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them/us next!
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April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am loving this! One of the things I hated about adultfanfiction.net being down was I couldn't read any of your stories. *hearts story and hato* I am definitly looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... Ryou and Marik... Very nice. Liked this chapter. I liked how you described Ryou's little genie outfit... I was waiting for the little hat, veil, and ponytail... ; ) Can't wait to see Marik's reaction as well as Ryou's...
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April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. Oh poor Ryou. Yami is being such a dick.
Nice opening chapter though. Can’t wait for the next.
Nice opening chapter though. Can’t wait for the next.
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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your storys so much are you going to repost and finish burning sae!? I hope you do I lve it so much it is my #1 favorite story!!!! so please keep going and update very soon!!!!
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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww. Poor poor Ryou.
I'm really wanting to know what happens next. I hope you're able to update soon.
I'm really wanting to know what happens next. I hope you're able to update soon.