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:o Nuuuu! Ryou's in a dumpster!

Man, Malik was such a retard. I don't blame Bakura for being pissed.

Hope Marik finds Ryou before someone else does. :(

Galres at the boys* You better hope he gets ryou back or else I will show you a picture of a naked pegasus!~

Damn it! I KNEW it! The chapter started off light and rather funny and quickly degenerated into a horrid mess brought about by the characters themselves. Surprisingly... it was Malik of all people who was pretty much a dick! Even though you girls didn't go into the details - you didn't need to - the rape of a "girl" Bakura was very disturbing because Malik thought it was funny all along. Very disturbing in fact. Not liking the Malik character too much in this story! And now poor Ryou... in a trash bin... where LORD knows what/who will pick him up next. AHHHHHHH!

yay for lovingness
I lvoe Ishizu; she's just so responible; only she would tell someone not to mistreat a genie with the threat of takign it away.
Great chapter!!
*is sad that she didn't get to review the last one* damn being sick

Ryou is cute and bashful as ever! I like that he took Marik into his bottle with him. And now that Marik wished for Ryou to keep his magic forever... free the genie you big goof! Free the pretty genie before the EVIL authoresses take him away from you and give him to some sex-crazed psychopath!!!! HURRY UP, MARIK! SAY THE MAGIC WORDS FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! Take that evil authoressessseessssss... ; )

Yay you updated the guys are all crazy exept for yami, hope to see an update soon

Wow. Malik and Bakura are rather IN YOUR FACE, aren't they? Poor Marik! Ryou is adorable as ever - innocent (sort of!) and naive... again, sort of... I think. ; ) And, for the love of God... don't abuse the Ryou genie! I beg of you! ; ) Now you girls have me do-doo, do-do-do-do-do-doo-do'ing the damn "I Love Jeanie" theme song!

CUUUUUUUUTE!! ^_^ Oh my God!! Sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I just kinda copied and pasted the story on my laptop for perusal and I FELL IN LOVE!! It is amazingly original and CUTE!! I just can't get over the fluffy Marik!! And Ryou's a doll!! Can I have one? I promise I'll set him free...with Marik...yeah...And they can rut like rabbits!! WHOO HOO!! I look forward to more!! ^_^

Well, I must say, your writing style has certainly developed a lot more than before AFF.net's hiatus! Great improvement! ^^ Although I know this fic is AU, Marik acting decent sort of humors me. XD But I really liked the ending; you are getting a lot better at describing things and keeping things somwehat realistic. And I liked the ending very much; wow do you cut straight to the point. Knowing Marik and Ryou though, they'll probably find some excuse not do it, and do it later... XD

Great story so far!! You're style is improving much more and that's wonderful!! Good job!

-AL

OMFG Ryou no! Don't say that you don't wantt o get fucked, hold on what am I saying fuck him. Lol nice update _devilsheart