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for I Dream of Ryou

by hatochiisai

person A:
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That part was awesome. This chapter was extremely sweet as well. It's only too bad Ryou can't relieve himself...or 'rise up to the occasion' either. T_T' Poor guy. At least it was sweet of Marik to think of him...you know, 'not taking advantage' of him and all. That was tender of Marik.

Poor Ahmose! Why do I have an image of him stalking down teh stairs and screaming, 'WHAT THE **** JUST HAPPENED?!"

This was such a sweet chapter! Keep it up!
person itavita
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice blowjob gift for the readers, there. ^.- Ryou must have a very talented mouth. Marik is quite the lucky duck. xD

I shall be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. :3
person Lyser
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gyahh^ ^ I love your story!!! Its really good so far!!! I can't wait to see what happens next! Wait! That wasn't the ending was it????
person sglily
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hail, oh Evil One. (You know I love you!) Innocent Ryou Genie??? Nope. Naughty, horny, teasing Ryou Genie... who can't get aroused??? You're EVIL to the Ryou Genie! I loved the part when Ryou was "attacking" Marik from the bottle... that was hot! And Marik's reactions... freaking out on the reporters as he experienced hot flashes of love from his little tormentor... priceless as well as hilarious! I see that Ryou Genie has a very talented mouth... ; ) So, I guess you aren't all that evil after all... for now... ; )
person Jeda
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! RYOU CAN'T HAV AN ERECTION!!! LMAO!!! Y MUST YOU TORTURE THIS POOR CHILD!! LMAO!! NEVER MIND THAT QUESTION IT'S SO FUCKING HILLARIOUS!! neway i guess we're gonna hav ta wait till ryou's free to get a good spicy hot lemon. or mayb not *givs evil grin*. i hope not but Either way with or without a lemon this fic ROX MY SOX!! i've been getting to read your fics now )since the school year is coming to a close) and they are so OFF THE HOOK!! You've definetly earned a spot on my list of favorite authors next to Bakurasgirl ( her fics are also OFF THE HOOK!). neway this fic is coming out so good and again u ROCK MY SOX!! o and i must also thank you for your fics cuz with out them i'd probably would of hanged myself in my closet over finals.

~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~ Much Luv From NYC --- lil mIss drAMa queen
person Jeda
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Y DO U LEAVE ME LIKE THIS?!!! WITH A REALLY GOOD CLIFFHANGE??!! i just started readin this like... 2day, and i'm hooked like a heroin addict. ilke this fic SOOOO MUCH! i just hav this REALLY bad feeling somthings gonna happen 2 ryou and it won't be preety. ( poor thing always get tortured it's kina funny actually) neway, keep writing this WODERFUL FIC and i'll ask my genie to replace the Statue of Liberty with a sstatue of you. DEAL?

~.~.~.~.~.~ Much Luv From New York- JEDA AKA lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person A:
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-snicker snicker- You know, I think my most fav. part of this chapter was Marik's "bottle". Oh dear god...-cracks up.-

-whew-. Okay. My imagination was running wild on me. -hugs Ryou and Marik- My hands are shivering in anticipation! First it was good, then it was angst, then good, and what now? Angst? -twiddle thumbs-. Anyways, awesome chatper, I love Mikado's little jokes to his brother. "You know. Fun. I know you've had it once..twice..in the course of your 20 years." XD XD XD. Nice. ^_-

-A:
person Tenshi
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh this is going to prove to be fun. Hopefully nothing bad happens.
Yay for da accounts. I have one too ^_^
person sglily
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hail, O' Evil One! ; ) I liked the part where Ahmose and Marik were the only ones to see the sexy Ryou genie... Marik's converstional wit in regardless to Ahmose is rather amusing as well. I can only imagine what is going to happen now that Ahmose has his memories back...
person itavita
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, I feel really bad for Ahmose. It's terribly irritating when people do that to you. xp You end up trying to strangle them (or, in this case, punching them in the stomach).

Can't wait to see what happens when Ahmose and Yami have their past memories back. ^^