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this is a wonderfully written story. i haven't enjoyed a read like this is some time i'm truely anticipating to read what happens next keep up the good work

Hurray for Anubis. I'm so happy for Ryou now that his soul is finaly free...but what is going to happen to Marik when he finds out that all of what remains of Ryou is an empty emotionless shell?

Haha, I loved how Yami kept teasing Ahmose! XD And, yay Anubis, he freed Ryou's soul! But I wonder what will happen when he remembers about Marik.

Whee an update!!! ^_^ A very lovely ch! Totally hilarious with how Yami teased Ahmose, just lovely. ^^

And I'm glad Ryou's free by Lord Anubis. He deserves it. *huggles Ryou-kun* But what will happen when Marik finds out the bottle only contains a souless body of Ryou? That would be bad, very bad. Hopefully something happy will come so that they will be together again.

You guys are awesome writers, I loved the ch! Hope to read more soon, see ya. ^_~

After reading that you were leaving i decided to take a few weeks of absence and sulk cuz i didn't have much to read. now that i see that you didn't leave,( I JUST FOUND OUT 2DAY CUZ I DEPRIVED MYSELF OF THE COMPUTER 4 A WHILE)i'm deciding to throw a huge party *invites 50 friends and throws a wild part*. i'm slightly tipsy and there's lots of confetti on me but i'm still here. the story just keeps gettin better and i'm literally ( and i mean it when i say literally) sittin at the egde of my seat to know what happens next. it's like when i went to go see pirates of the carribean dead man's chest and the movie ended with a cliffhanger except i don't hav 2 wait 2 years 4 tha next update( it was a great movie anyway and johnny depp is spicy hot). i'm so happy right now. you made my day!! the story's HOT. HOT I TELL U!!

Much luv from NYC *AND THROWING A SICK PARTY 4 YA*~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
and ahmose and yami need to get it on!!! O YEAH A HOT LEMON WITH AHOMSE x YAMI!! SO SEXY!! (im going nuts)

Well, I guess you were right, Ahmose is the one who needs to beware! Yami is after his ass... literally! This was a bit of a "fluffier" chapter - a well done one, don't get me wrong! Just lighter - in light of the horrible things that are happening to Ryou and the rest of the world while these BOZOS screw off! ; ) (You know I love to abuse you! And, you know I'll be back to read more because I am addicted!) That was pretty slick there with a new god showing up on the scene. And, well, I guess Ryou is happy... at least his sould isn't suffering... although he doesn't have Marik... but you gals will fix that right? RIGHT?

Wonderful story as always. I like the whole Ryou genie falls in love w/ Mariku thing. It's so cute. So he better get rescued soon! Poor Ryou-kun. *huggles Ryou* Damn crazy master for stealing him. :P Ah but angst is good, I love angst and I love your stories. ^_^

So yeah, what does Yami remember from the past? Hopefully something to help fix this problem. I like the character portrayal of him, sarcastic, witty, and interesting. Not that I don't like your portrayals of the other characters, because I do love them, I just felt like pointing out Yami's. lol.

I seem to be all over the place on this review, must be because I'm reviewing for it for yesterday night and that the awesomeness is causing me to jump all over. XD. Anyways, hope to read some more of this soon. See ya next time. ^_~

AWSOME STORY!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please hurry! XD I know how u feel bout reviews, most of us writers r suffereing wit a lack of response, but wat can we do but whine about it? Ne way, I'LL REVIEW U!! ^.^ Again, great story, I love it!

~ChibiRinni ^.~

I love this story! Poor Ryou... I hope Mai gets him ^-^ Update soon!

Oh - wonderful story! Please update soon - I can't wait to find out what happens next.
You're a terrific storyteller!
:)