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o yes and i got 2 mention bakura ahmose yami and marik make hot chicks. i saw the devientart pic. SEXY. MUY CALIENTE( i think thats how u spell it. i don't kno i got a C- in Spanish)

Love this fic...love Ahmose in it. Him and Yami! SQUEEE ^__^ Sorry, as much as I like Marik and Ryou for some reason my attention is focusedon how Ahmose and Yami are doing.

I feel so sorry for Ryou, he thought that Marik talking to him was just a cruel trick *sniff* And whilst Mariks reaction was hysterical on the hand that he kept waking everyone up it was also so sad that he was so surt by it. The poor hairy lug *grin*

Actually, talking of feeling sorry for people...BAKURA *Glomp* He is such a...cutie. Not that i'd ever risk saying somethiing like that to his face, I don't fancy being killed, maimed or otherwise hurt.

Hey! I managed to match up the review with the actualy story... o.O Nice picture of "The Girls"! ; ) The Ryou genie was technically happy... his soul living a new life free from servitude and beatings... now he is miserable again... As is everyone else, I do believe, until Marik gets his genie back...

Well well, that was an interesting ending to the ch. Ryou's bottle is smashed and his body's turned to dust, what's going to happen next? Of course, I'll be reading on to find out. ^_^

Hilarious and suspenseful, very intriguing ch. And an ingenius way to get them in, turning them into girls. Ah, the whole scene in the beginning was just great. Very amusing. Yami -does- taunt poor Ahmose a whole bunch, but it's all lovely and good. lol. hehehe. Wished you guys would write that lemon, it'd be so great. Ah well. ^^ Baku certainly seemed to recall his unpleasant feeling as a woman, poor him. Sort of surprised he still went on with it though. Definitely looking forward to the next ch. Til then, see ya. ^_~

WTF? Wheres the rest!! UPDATE SOON YOU MORON!!!

Well, that was unexpected and clever - getting the guys into the palace as girls. I was sort of surprised that Bakura relented and allowed himself to take on the form of a woman. It was obvious that he remembered something of his past experience with womanhood. Ryou was depicted as such a mess and now has turned to dust... just how are you going to bring back the Ryou genie so he can be HAPPY with Marik, hm? : )

NOOOO!!! Bad cliffhanger Bad! That is so terrible. But they do find a way to be together, right? This chapter was wonderful. Can't wait for the next one.

Sorry, I forgot to ask: Will you do something with a Yami/Ahmose lemon? As hard as Yami chases him, I really want to see it.

I'm half happy that poor Ryou isn't in pain anymore, but I'm also horrified that he's without Marik and his body is still there. Has he just not realized this means he can't be with Marik? He didn't even ask about it. I love this story. Please hurry with the next chapter.

Its a wonderful story! I cannot wait to see what happens next. Write faster! But not to fast i'm a writer i know what happens when you rush things they can turn out with horrible results.