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Ryou's back! Yay! hehe. ^_^ Now then, let's proceed to his memories and recognization, hopefully. Then commence the lemon(s). XD *huggles*

And of course, Anubis was teasing poor Ahmose. And that's saying something, like Ahmose needs to get laid soon. heh heh. Woot for the progress of almost getting Mallychan close to writing the lemon! Hopes for more progression. hehe.

Gotta love that ch too, cuz I'm loving the fic. ^_^ Still as much humor as ever, such awesomeness. Til the next ch. ^_~

Maia: I finished 19!!! *does a little vitory dance then looks at the readers of her review and started to straighten herself up.*

(the reviewer turns into her serious persona.)

Lai: AHEM, I mean glad that I have read the updated chapter.

(then to her not so serious persona.. ecchi girl)

Ria: Is it nearing the end? guess it is... awww.. It is a good fic somehow I wanted it to end in well 25 chapters. Showing each protagonist pairing's epilogue. *grins*

(then turns into a worried girl.)

Aina: you really don't have to that... *bows*

(normal)

Ayan: TY bye bye for now!

oh! hana reviewed too!1 well i'm up to chapter 16 right now. kinda liked atemu controlling ahnose agen. ehe. sadden by ryou's misfortune (like in burning sea and tearing down d sky) but as hana also said its not bakuraXryou this time. fyi: hana introduced me to your works hatochiisai and i must say i completely liked everything. LOLz bye for now! Ü

oh! hana reviewed too! well i'm up to chapter 16 right now. kinda liked atemu controlling ahnose agen. ehe. sadden by ryou's misfortune (like in burning sea and tearing down d sky) but as hana also said its not bakuraXryou this time. fyi: hana introduced me to your works hatochiisai and i must say i completely liked everything. LOLz bye for now! Ü

As always, serious love to the wonderful fiction. And if myself and others were to begin a petition for an Ahmose/Yami lemon, do you think that it would sway the co-author? If so, I am fully prepared to start one! ^^

Yes its true I do adore Ahmose (I even spelt the name right :D) and I loved him in this chapter too. He's so sexy when he goes back to his roots and does magic...*smiles* Incidently his converstaion with Anubis was spot on. The God had just the right amount of irritation and affection for his disciple...though I do hope that Yami and Ahmose manage to redeem themselves enough to make it into the lands of the dead and not continue to be reincarnated for all of time, I mean come on they both have really changed!! However, I was given hope by the fact that Anubis teased Ahmose about still being a virgin *giggles* even the Gods are fed up with it. Maybe thats what he needs to do, shag Yami and all will be forgiven. *Laugh* Hmmm, maybe that ~is~ why I focus on them...if so kudos to your co-author for terrorizing Ahmose (poor guy) because it works!

I loved it when Ryou went to talk to Anubis as well- he really is a pretty cool God- and Anubis was all confused and then he suddenly understood. I guess thats why I wasn't too worried when Anubis said he wouldn't return Ryou to Ahmose...because he already knew that Ryou wanted to return so he was just messing with them...I think *Laugh* I never make much sense.

Yay Ryou is back *glomp* He's back...that is so cool! I still reckon there are gonna have to be a few issues to be sorted out but this story seems to be winding down...is there a sequel? I hope so because that would just be awesome!

Ah...I seem to have rambled on...sorry *grin*

I really liked the verbal exchanges between Ahmose and Anubis... very well done. And thank you very much for not making us have to endure 35 days of hell in their entirety until Ryou returned! ; ) I am very anxious to see what Ryou remembers and what you have in store for us readers now that the Ryou Genie is back... Hurry up Pharaoh! Command/wish the Ryou Genie free!

Damn! when a god tells you that u need 2 get layed THAT'S WHEN U KNOW THAT IT IS REALLY TYME 2 GET SOME!that's just sad. SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!(THAT'S WHAT I DID AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER) I'M SO HAPPY!!! RYOU'S BACK DAMN IT!!! *throws huge block party* . u gotta come to this party it's insane. OMG i'm so happy ryou's back. AND HE'S GONNA GET LAYED!!! right? is he? i mean the poor kid couldn't even have an erection(*snikers* that erection thing still cracks me up.)he deserves a proper lemon. right? please be nice. SOOOOOOOOOOOO... MARIKxRYOU LEMON!! please please *gives chibi puppy dog eyes* u can't resist the puppy dog eyes!! u kno u can't!! neway i luv this chapter so much it made me squeal. i luv the chracters, i luv the chapters i luv the fic and i luv u for writing it. YOU ROCKED MY SUMMERS SOX!! GO HATO AND KONEKOMALLCHAN!!! AND GO YANKEES I LUV YOU!!!(don't kno where that came from *scratches head*)

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Another lovely ch, aww poor Mariku and Ryou. *huggles* Ryou was all freaked out, poor guy. Hope to see them together soon. But nevertheless humorous, entertaining, and semi-angst filled. ^_^ I loved that one comment, UFM, XD. Gods, I loved that.

And once again, more taunting for Ahmose, whee! Yami and his comments, gods I love that too. I wish you luck on convincing your co-author. Maybe one day we'll see that. ^^

Lovely pic of them as girls, I particularly liked Ahmose for that matter. Great job! ^_^ Can't wait til the next ch. See ya. ^_~

OMG!! THIS CHAPTER MADE ME CRACK UP SO MUCH!! UFM!? lmao. i'm gonna use that every tyme my brother comes flying at me outta no where EXCEPT IT'LL B UFB!! and the naked chicken OMG THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!! chickens in general crack me up( except 4 tha 1 that tryed 2 attack me a few years ago. long story)but imagining a naked chicken? omg tha's just 2 funny. man that was a good laugh. i just caught up on reading chapters 17&18 and between reading that and reading bakurasgirls' Apocolypse, i've fallen off my chair at least 6 tymes because i'm 2 busy sitting at the ege of my seat and my ass is killing me. i read the note at the end of chapter 17 and all i have 2 say is 'damn it' and then sulk 4 about 5 seconds. the sexual tension between them is 2 much 4 me 2 handle...but hell i'll live. anyways i think i should go 2 slepp now. it's after 2 a.m. and frankly i'm really tired. i'm getting addicted 2 yours and bakurasgirls' fics lik i am with harry potter and let me tell u...thats ADDICTED!! LIKE NO JOKE. it's a healthy addicted though. anyways nighty night. *falls asleep holding bakura and marik plushie*