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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally found you! Yay! This story was AMAZING! I loved every second of it! I am going to go read the sequel right now and then read all the new stories you've posted that I haven't gotten a chance to read yet. Great job, to the both of you Hato, you and your co-author have a great thing going, keep it up!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm absloutely speechless...That was out of this world in it's brilliance!!!!!!! It would have been nice to see yami and ahmose get it on...but oh well ^_^ We got some hot marik/ryou action in it's place. Loved it almost as much as marik loves ryou. Thanks for writing and posting something that keeps me my soul AFLAME!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so fluffy and cute! ^_^ hehe. Such a lovely ch and a lovely lemon. I loved it! And finally, Ryou can experience true love and is together with Mariku! Whee! It was of course entertaining and dutifully well written. I absolutely enjoyed the whole story. I can't wait to go on to that sequel, hehehe.
I apologize for the semi-late review, and I shall go on to your sequel. Later. ^_~
I apologize for the semi-late review, and I shall go on to your sequel. Later. ^_~
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just read through this excellent fanfic of yours and thought I would drop you a line. It was well written and plotted, and hilarious in places! *grins* Even if I would have liked to have seen Yami do some magic.
The only complaint I really have is that I hate it when the OC's in a story steal the glory. Don't get me wrong, I like Ahmose, but if I wanted to read a fic with an OC saving the day I would read original fiction, not fanfiction. Near the end it was like Yami and Bakura were just around for colour while Ahmose saved the day and basically did everything in the last four chapters. I mean, he sent the table flying, cut the bad guy's head off, contacted Anubis to get Ryou's soul back... even he and his brother reformed the bottle. The Yugioh characters basically spent the last four chapters as comic relief or with their thumbs stuck up their asses, with the exception of Marik.
Still a really well done story though. I enjoyed it, and I'll likely read my way through the next one when it's posted.
Ja ne!
The only complaint I really have is that I hate it when the OC's in a story steal the glory. Don't get me wrong, I like Ahmose, but if I wanted to read a fic with an OC saving the day I would read original fiction, not fanfiction. Near the end it was like Yami and Bakura were just around for colour while Ahmose saved the day and basically did everything in the last four chapters. I mean, he sent the table flying, cut the bad guy's head off, contacted Anubis to get Ryou's soul back... even he and his brother reformed the bottle. The Yugioh characters basically spent the last four chapters as comic relief or with their thumbs stuck up their asses, with the exception of Marik.
Still a really well done story though. I enjoyed it, and I'll likely read my way through the next one when it's posted.
Ja ne!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always this was wonderful. I guess I can wait for her to get used to it as long as you do one on your own.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH, PRAISE GOD! THE RYOU GENIE IS FINALLY HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Which means then that the reader/reviewer is very happy!) Nice chapter and nice ending. Of course you had to have the nice citrusy lemon scene... poor Ryou Genie... finally able to experience sex... with love... a great combination if there ever was one. Looking forward to the sequel!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Hugs* How can people not like him?! Very very sexy *sing* Yes with all the pretty magic making all that hair of his fly about... *purrs* Lol, I'm a little crazy. As much as I adore Ahmose I do have to say that I rather like Mallu-chan tormenting the poor guy, definatly some of the highlights of the fics.
Yay, sequel! I don't have to cry about the fact that this one is over now.... *cheers* but, next weekend? *Face falls* But, I'm going into hospital next weekend. I'm not going to be able to see it for an age! *Sniff* Now I'm sad...waaah.
Still I rather enjoyed the Marik/Ryou lemon. Yay that the little guy can now get aroused *cough* its a very important fact. He he. Still they are just too cute together. I swear I've got cavities. All round excellent fic!
Yay, sequel! I don't have to cry about the fact that this one is over now.... *cheers* but, next weekend? *Face falls* But, I'm going into hospital next weekend. I'm not going to be able to see it for an age! *Sniff* Now I'm sad...waaah.
Still I rather enjoyed the Marik/Ryou lemon. Yay that the little guy can now get aroused *cough* its a very important fact. He he. Still they are just too cute together. I swear I've got cavities. All round excellent fic!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BAKA!!! I HATE YOU!! well actually i don't I just prefer to say that and scare the shit out of them/wind them up anyway...fantastic ending by the way looking forward to the sequel *grin*
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! Wat a sweet ending. fireworks and everything. AND THE LEMON I BEGGED YOU FOR!! Thanks 4 tha update. i really needed it now that school is about 2 start and i'm counting down how many days i have left to live. IT'S THE MOST WONDERFUL TYME OF THE YEAR YA KNOW!! *SIGHS* Can't wait 4 tha sequel though. i kno it's gonna be good cause you're writing it. it sounds good 2 i like the title. o and i have 2 kno wat happened between ahomse and yami cause i kno it's gonna b funny. Neway can't wait 4 tha sequel. o and can you send me marik turned into a lion cub? i just have 2 have him!!! he's just 2 cute and cuddly.
Much Luv From The NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
LIL mIss drAMa QUEEN
Much Luv From The NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
LIL mIss drAMa QUEEN
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BFMWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! You are a moron!! So update ASAP!!!BFMWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!
Whatcha gonna do about it??!! *smirk*
Whatcha gonna do about it??!! *smirk*