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for Mind crush

by akuchan

person LadyVirgo91656
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Seto has always been in denial about both his past life and his feelings for Jounochi. Please update soon.
person Jiall
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yami's defence is weak and I hope that he is taken to task for it, preferably by Yuugi. I recognize that it is a tactic to make Seto wake up and smell the coffee, but to torture Jou like that is unfair and not in keeping with a good friend.
person kitten
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. I really like it, though I am a bit confiused. When Jou talks to Seto, can everyone else hear what he is saying; if yes, what do htey think; if no, what can they hear nad see Jou do. But all in all, I really like your story. It's very captivating. I can't wait until the next shapter. Please update soon.

Love,
Kitten
person Josie
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz write another chapter really quickly! This story has an awesome plotline and is really well written. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

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