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the me, and then the anon, and then me, and then the anon are all me, because it kept cutting me off.....

Ack! So awsome! Wonderful writing. I just love this pairing to death and beyond. But, unfortunetly i dont quiet like how seto refers to jou as a she. Hes perfect the way he is. Adorable!

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! Yami rules!!!! I really thought for a moment that he was going to have his way with Jou. But all was part of a well taken plan.
Besides, Yugi wouldn't let Yami do more damage, than what he already did.
So far so good.
I wanna see Seto and Kaiba fighting over de blond!!!!!!!!! update soon!
BTW, in wikipedia, there's a section dedicated to Kaiba. Set, is the real name of his past life, and his rebellion against yami, was because he was being controlled by his father Akunadin. And Seto Kaiba (which means something like sea horse, but according to japanese mythology is a little sea dragon) is the actual self.
Maybe is a little late for the info, but I hope It will be of some use for you.
TAKE CARE AND UPDATE SOON!

Man I cannot believe Yami would do that to Jou but it makes good storytelling so what the heck...you never do know right? But I knew Yami was playing around in that last chap..it was soo obvious. All this people as duel monsters and Jou's former pov was really confusing but nicely descriptive. Oh and the interaction between everyone was great!

yami's a dick. talk about not respecting someone elses feelings

Cool! I loved it ^-^
Please update soon! XD

lol.....that is funny (about my review popping up just as you were going to post)).....hmmmm........nice chappie........it's so funny how seto can never seem to admit to himself that he loves jou.......and yet, there are so many signs that he does........he's so scared of the feelings, and what they mean, it's sort of sad in a way..........heh....that part where jou thought that seto was a blue-eyes and then jumped on his back and everything made me actually blush because i was sort of embarrassed for jou (who didn't know it was seto, and who was the only one who saw seto differently) and for seto (who had everyone laughing at him, and who /really/ enjoyed jou-pup on his back)........and it's funny because i haven't really blushed while reading a yaoi in a long time........good job! :^-^:....and it wasn't even sex that did it......it was a simple, kinda cute act........anywho, i still lurves your story to death and i can't wait until seto is able to confess his love for jou, and jou is able to realise that it's seto he loves......our cold-hearted ceo seto.....not the preist seth-seto......soooo.....yeah......if seto ends up having to take the priest into him ((which would probably be pretty cool, seeing as how they don't get along at all *laughs at the mental immage of seto constantly arguing with himself*)) will they ((seth and seto)) argue over jou? or will seto just get him? or maybe will seth's jou come back? ((wow......that's really complicated *sheepish grin*)).......okay......i'll stop now.....sorry for my long review, and sorry if i just totally confused you......i was just rambling *grin*.......sooo.......update soon! *hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt!

Wonderful story!!! It makes me smile. Please continue to update (quickly cause I hate waiting when I really like the story!), I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Keep up the great work!!!

i need the next chapter!!!! *falls on floor twitching*

Jou on Seto back thinking hes a dragon got to love it. And yes Seto is right to be cautious of the priest. hes not to be trusted. Great story. Update soon.