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by akuchan

schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.......NOOOOOSE! Drat now I have to wait for the update T-T curse you and your awesome story
J-chan
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
person ... ((or kitkattcassy))
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




and i'm still waiting fer some updates


*grin* lurves you!!!!
person ... ((or kitkattcassy))
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!

.....and i'm still waiting for an update.......

but mainly.....MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!! (or whatever it is you do/don't celibrate)
person catti-dono
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That ending almost had a sinister quality to it....my guess is that this was a huge plot to get the priest out and now all havoc is going to run loose....Kami....I hope not....but it has the flavor for it...laughs manically....

Now the whining begins...Akuchan-dono its been over two mooonnnthhs since you updated...WAAAAAAAAA....(how was that?)....Pleeeeeassssssssse update.....pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeasssssseeeeeee....(better?)...catti
person smalvina
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more
person ... ((or kitkattcassy))
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaa!!!!!!! i just knew that yami was doing it on purpose!........okay.........so i thought that yami was truly being an asshole who really wanted jou *sheepish grin* but when he kissed jou i knew, honestly i did!.......hmmmm..........what did jou see yami as, anyway? did he see him as just normal, or was he uber good looking, or what?........ahhhhh *squeal* i loved how seto ((i'm gonna call seto kaiba either seto or kaiba, and the priest will just that "the priest")) and jou-pup got to sleep together ^-^..........i can just see seto sleeping all serene-like, and then jou's all cuddled up next to him, a leg thrown over seto's leg, and an arm thrown over seto's stomach.....he'd be able to look messy and totally adorable at the same time, the way that only our jou-chan can.........hmmmmmmm........lol, poor honda! *is grinning evilly even as she says that* jounouchi doesn't like him as a duel monster...........i guess he jusr doesnt give off good enough "vibes".........zomg! when he ((jou of course! <3)) saw mokie as kuribo ((sorry, i know i probably spelled that wrong, but my brain isn't working now, as it's currently 11:20 at night)) and totally glomped him and everything! that was great funni-ness...........on your writing style, i would like to say that i love the way that you are able to combine the serious aspects of this story line, with great humor that doesn't go over-boared and take away from the over-all feel of your story ((and if that didn't make any sense, i'm basically saying you kick-ass *huggles*))..........lol, i just thought of this- it's the last thing, i swear - when you say that the kiss between yami and jou affected everyone ((even mokie-the little loveable pervert)) did you mean it in the way i thought you meant it?.....oh yeah! and does everyone know how seto feels now, sense he connected with the rod just to get yami away from jou? ((okay, so maybe that wasn't the last thing.....*sheepish grin*)) alright, i guess i should get to bed now *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
((jou of course! <3)) saw mokie as kuribo ((sorry, i know i probably spelled that wrong, but my brain isn't working now, as it's currently 11:20 at night)) and totally glomped him and everything! that was great funni-ness...........on your writing style, i would like to say that i love the way that you are able to combine the serious aspects of this story line, with great humor that doesn't go over-boared and take away from the over-all feel of your story ((and if that didn't make any sense, i'm basically saying you kick-ass *huggles*))..........lol, i just thought of this- it's the last thing, i swear - when you say that the kiss between yami and jou affected everyone ((even mokie-the little loveable pervert)) did you mean it in the way i thought you meant it?.....oh yeah! and does everyone know how seto feels now, sense he connected with the rod just to get yami away from jou? ((okay, so maybe that wasn't the last thing.....*sheepish grin*)) alright, i guess i should get to bed now *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!
person ... ((or kitkattcassy))
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
((jou of course! <3)) saw mokie as kuribo ((sorry, i know i probably spelled that wrong, but my brain isn't working now, as it's currently 11:20 at night)) and totally glomped him and everything! that was great funni-ness...........on your writing style, i would like to say that i love the way that you are able to combine the serious aspects of this story line, with great humor that doesn't go over-boared and take away from the over-all feel of your story ((and if that didn't make any sense, i'm basically saying you kick-ass *huggles*))..........lol, i just thought of this- it's the last thing, i swear - when you say that the kiss between yami and jou affected everyone ((even mokie-the little loveable pervert)) did you mean it in the way i thought you meant it?.....oh yeah! and does everyone know how seto feels now, sense he connected with the rod just to get yami away from jou? ((okay, so maybe that wasn't the last thing.....*sheepish grin*)) alright, i guess i should get to bed now *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... saw mokie as kuribo ((sorry, i know i probably spelled that wrong, but my brain isn't working now, as it's currently 11:20 at night)) and totally glomped him and everything! that was great funni-ness...........on your writing style, i would like to say that i love the way that you are able to combine the serious aspects of this story line, with great humor that doesn't go over-boared and take away from the over-all feel of your story ((and if that didn't make any sense, i'm basically saying you kick-ass *huggles*))..........lol, i just thought of this- it's the last thing, i swear - when you say that the kiss between yami and jou affected everyone ((even mokie-the little loveable pervert)) did you mean it in the way i thought you meant it?.....oh yeah! and does everyone know how seto feels now, sense he connected with the rod just to get yami away from jou? ((okay, so maybe that wasn't the last thing.....*sheepish grin*)) alright, i guess i should get to bed now *huggles* ja ne and love as thou wilt!