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for The Stranger

by mmm

person hikari raine
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Hi,

wow cool story I just sat here and all of it in one sitting. Love it would love to see more.

Update soon

Ja
person Ryan
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter, i can't wait to find out what happens next. Did i mention i love this story, lol. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person Dark Toy
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, the pain in the ass comment, aplies to you, because you make me scream every time I read this fic. And for Seth because... Well, Seth is Seth, and... his an ass. Really, make Jono suffer that much....
Update soon!
person ayachan
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT SETH, WHY ARE YOU SO STUPID?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! gah! evil.. and i thought i could handle angst well XD glad that you're ok
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SETH YOURA BLOODY IDIOT!!!!
person kora
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waahh, poor Jono. TT__TT
I want to thwack Seth! D<
Anyways, great story, this is my favorite pairing! ^_^

Glad to hear you got straight A's!
person shanghanjin
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and it was time that Seto got a taste of his own medicine, but is it too late for him to tell Jono how he feels. Ohh keep writing I'm hanging in suspense.
person Shisho Kat
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story - keep updating, can't wait to read what happens!
:)
person Yukiko_xAkuma
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, love the story please update soon. I will write another three reviews if I have to to get you to update as soo nas you can. Thank you. P.S. hope your story has a happy ending.
person Jhon Doe
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very well written. I love the whole Seto and Joey as lovers. Please, continue I'm eagerly awaiting the rest of the story.