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for The Stranger

by mmm

person Butterfly
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another chappy! You better make Jono happy, Seth! >.< LOL, anyway, hurry and update soon cause it's so good!
person Ryan
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and post the next chapter, i am dying to read what happens next. This story is one of the best i have ever read on this site, i look to see if it has been updated yet at least twice a day, thanks for writing this amazing story.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seth needs to get his story straight!
person Dark Toy
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does the words "pain in the ass", make you think of something????
Give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GODS!!!!!!!!!
FOR RA'S SAKE!!! I'm Oh soooooooooo gonna Kick Seth if he goes cold as ice again with poor Jono!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ayachan
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! woo-hoo, all is well
person smalvina
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare hurt Jono again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Don't make seth more idiot than he is!
person ChibiRinni (too lazy 2 log n or give email)
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY!! This was getting really good and then BOOM, no more chapters! XD Please put up the next one!! I wanna see why he's acting so funny! Good story, even with the few spelling mistakes (sometimes u have a tendancy to hit the 'W' instead of the 'E'), otherwise keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more! BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
person shanghanjin
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes, i would love to see what happens to Seth and how he also made love to Jono, so please keep writing. Good chapter
person Akane The Fox
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. More drama for Jono? Or something else? Hurry and put the next chapter up so that I won't go crazy! O.< *twitch*
person Firesm
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update real soon! I really like this story so far!