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for The Stranger

by mmm

person bunnyb
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you bitch cruel and unusal punishment great job though luve it update soon, and maybe my lazy ass can do the same with my fics
person jess
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SAVE JONO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nekosune
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That wsas wonderful! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ Update soon for more yamyams!
person Hikari Raine
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you left it off at the best part. Hurry up and update soon.
person catti-dono
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UGGGG....I hate cliffhangers!!!....You are so mean....sobs...poor Jono....I cant see Jono giving in too easy to that pervert...well see...damn good story, though....are we up to ten reviews yet? catti
person Nekosune
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I'm so glad you chose to continue it! ^_^ Lots and lots of yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ Update soon for more yamyams, I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^_^
person Mystic
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An AE Seth/Jono! Please continue! I adore this fic!
person FoxOfNineTails
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for knowing how to spell!
I loved your fic up to chapter 11, because it was fluffy and sweet, yet realistic..........
But now something bad is going to happen and it is going to angsty T.T
You are going too make me, a poor fanfiction reader cry
:sigh: I am far to emosional anyway
Keep writing and I will keep reading, no matter how angsty it gets
person jess
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
must read more
poor jono...*tear*
person Belle ange
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote C because I'm half asleep and cant' think of anything better. Ask me latter and I will gladly come up with something. i can't write but I have great ideas and you write beautifully so I would like to suggest a bit of cooperation on our parts. You would be like a ghost writer only better because I only give suggestions. Get back to me when you get this and we can discuss it further. Thank you and I would like to say again that you write beautifully and don't say you can't write lemons. I suck at them and I've read enough to be an expert! Keep it up. I'm impressed.