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for The Stranger

by mmm

person Nekosune
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Pocky is like yamyams, but with the flavor already on it. So, basically it's like a cookie stick dipped in chocolate or strawbery, or any other flavor. ^_^
person jess
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SAVE JONOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Hikari Raine
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I know 10 reivews but that doesn't mean that I can't hope that the next chapter will come out soon. Love this story. I think it's great and I hope Seth finds our lovely Jono soon

Ja
person shanghanjin
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write that Seth will be able to finds Jono. Those bad man are starting to hurt my Jou pup. Keep up the good work and please update soon, i want to know what happens next.
person shanghanjin
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally some suspense has been mixed into the story' oh this is getting good. Now what with Seth do when he learns that his beloved puppy has been kidnapped by two the guards? Keep writing. It's getting good, excellent work
person ayachan
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no! please don't let jono get raped! that would just be too horrible to read ;_;
person Zanne
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good story!!!!!!
person Velvetina
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Ooh, this is looking so interesting but oh my god poor Jono. I already want to kill Asim for even thinking this let alone doing...*sniff* Poor Seth too, he'll go nuts when he finds out. I'm so glad to see this though and am looking foward to a fun/angsty fic coming up. Not to mention the sequeal. *hug* Yay for good fics

Love Velvetina xx
person Heather
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARRGGGG!! That's not fair! You left it at a cliffhanger!!! But I LOVE the story.....please update soon?
person loverskeeper
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. Please don't stop because I need to know what happens to Jono. Please have Seth save him because Jono has been through enough!