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Yay update!! Sorry I didn't respond to the note but I had some hospital things. But it was very cute and made me smile! You live in Hollywood? Is that as cool as everyone imagines or not? Lol.

Eeek, poor Jou, poor Seth. This situation is just going to go bang I know it. Will Seth find Jono in time? It looks unlikely but we can always hope..right?! *Laugh* Oh dear I wonder how miserable Seth will make everyone whilst searching for Jono...how the pharoah will react...theres a whole lotta questions going through my mind. Anyway, great chapter!

Velvetina

Me: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! SETH USE THE ROD TO SAVE HIM RA DAMN IT!!!

Seth: Shut up Ishtar Motou...who are you anyway...

Me: A good friend of The Thief King anyway, Find him!!

Seth: Atemu should arrest you you know....

Me: Well Sorrryyy for trying to help you find your boyfriend...*disappers* Update soon...Poor Jono

Seth: What the hell? Jono...where are you? *is worried*

ah, will there be details regarding the scene whereby jono is forcibly taken? will he be raped in the first place?

Yay for Seth!!! He gets laid within seconds of finding Jono*lucky*. Keep updating.

ive nticed that in your story you hate to have bad things happen unless it is really necessary. im glad that jono wasnt raped, he finally got seth to show that he loved him and i think that it would have been awful if he was rpaed. i love the story so far... in sry but ive been lurkin for a while and i felt it was time to make my presence known ^^

great story
yunasgrace

I had every intention of reading and not reviewing, since for the past few months I've been out of reviewer-mode, but I simply must comment on the statement you made at the end of chapter 10: "I suck at writing lemons."

I completely disagree :) I think your lemons are lovely. They're not scalding hot or exactly perfect, but they're still very good. They're tender and well-written, and I enjoyed them very much :) Just some positive feedback for ya. Keep writing!

You made me happy. My jou pup is safe and unharmed. I hope you update soon, I wnat to see what happens next. Good chapter.

Don't worry about writing a lot, I do it all the time and I tend to be fascinated by what people have to say anyway...I'm very nosey lol.

Ergh mega sympathy for the doctor thing! I really, really hate it. They tend to try to talk over my head and not really tell me whats going on.

Oooh, yay Seth arrived in time! Jono was saved....that is so romantic. Urgh, and I am so glad that Usi and Asim got what was coming to them...creepy sods. **shudder** Lol for poor Atem though, dealing with a crazed Seth cannot be fun.

Hehe, yeah I can imagine it isn't as glam living there as everyone reckons it would be. Like you said theres tourists everywhere and up themselves stars. But still its a coversation topic...'where do you live?' 'Hollywood'...actually then you'd probably get asked irritating questions about which stars you'd seen...hmmm *Thinks*

Ergh yeah its hot here too, probably not as hot as there but far to hot for me.

Velvetina xx

Keep writing its getting really good, what's going to happen next, I'm dying of suspense. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

AAA...A little bit of tortour is good for Jono....he is so adorable when he is tortured...smirks....catti