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for The Stranger

by mmm

person RabidSqurl
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Meeeeeow. XD
person anon
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, so you update acording to review hmm?
ok here's a review!!!
wow, two lemon scenes in a row!!!!! this is a good bargain!!!

and so , since you have another review you just have to... update!!!!!!!!!! yeah you must update!!! ^_^
person P.A.S
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and a great lemony honey~! love it!
seth is such a meanie!!! but jono loves it eh. oh, owicie bruissing wrists.,, should go saok them in cool water, nice. i tried that, it makes you feel better.

whne will you update again?
person shanghanjin
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter keep up the good work. PLease update soon.
person Lavy
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Seth saved Jono! He even had fun to top it all off too! XD
person Yuta
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. Please update, I don't think I can wait. I do have a question, I havn't watched Yugioh in so long I have forgotten the characters. So, is Jono Yugi or Yami or some other character. Also, is Seth Seto Kabia or what. I am confused. I suppose the millenium rod is a give away. Because in the series Kabia is supposed to have it. I don't know I am kinda confused. Anyways, great work so far. Happy to be able to read this, very well written. Please update soon, I can't wait!
person amey
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwww! it was so good!! i loved it!! i wish i could mind a seto and mokuba fanfic or a mokuba and joey fanfic
person rabidsqurl
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rowr. ;) Very nice.
person anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw, how sweet of seth :D

please update!
person loverskeeper
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter and what happen to those two. Showed them what happens when they mess with Jono. Please update soon. Again loved this chapter.