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for The Stranger

by mmm

person REYGURL
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY~!!!!!!!SO FAR CANT WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!!PLZ BE SOON =]
person DarkLotos
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is great !!
Write more , please!!! ^_^
I know that in Egypt the age of 16 it's not very young but...well Seth is 16 or 17 ...will he do it with Jono when he is only 13 !?
Waithing for the next chapter !!!
person ChibiRinni
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This seems like such a cute story! I can't wait to read more! I know how you feel about the reviews. All of us writers want more, but we just aren't having any luck (or is it just me and u? ^.^;; ) Well, ne way, great story so far. Update ASAP so I can know what happens next!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
person Asmodes Red Gold
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I thought it was good. Update soon, please!
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the story is really good keep it going i wnat more MORE i tell you and i always get what i want

so post more
person fire_lilly
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is cute but why did you make Jou 13? it seems a little young especally since you don't list Seth's age. I can't think of much more to say than it's cute and I like it.
person MaRiLyNe
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! THE SUSPENCE IS GONNA KILL ME IF YOU DONT CONTINUE. I LOVE THIS STORY...PLEAZE,PLEAZE,PLEAZE CONTINUE!!!!
person I-chan
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even if you asked for money, I wouldn't have any. But here's my review. Hope you update soon.
person Jiall
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't ask me how I know, but I do believe that Seth already knows what to do with Jono. He just needs to be patient. I like the story as it does not contain a violent/hateful Jou (as of yet). As for the lack of reviews, I do believe that some people have more or less given up on AFF. It disappeared for a month and still does not have all of its old stories up and running yet. People are impatient and generally have a short attention span.
person IshizuIsisIshtar
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE IT MORE MORE PLZ GIVE ME MORE LOL