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for The Stranger

by mmm

person dragon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey um i understand the ending but you said you were going to have jono remember his past before he met seth i am still curious on that or will that be revealed in the new story you writting?
person Sekre
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story ... I'll be reading your sequel ^^
person shanghanjin
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story from start to finish, I suppose that the sequel will be focusing on the reincarnations of Seth and Jono, by reincarnations I mean Seto and Joey. I have an idea for the tiltle of the sequel, if your interested thet is, well here's the title i thought of, 'Awakened Memories: The Stranger Returns', if its too much then you don't have to use it. I sorta got the idea from your paragraph at the end where Seth had his memories gone, so i figured it could work, but it's your story, your choice. I hope that the sequel will be posted soon. I can hardly wait, keep up the good work and i hope to read more from you soon.
person Dark Toy
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh!!!!!!!! a sequel! *squikes*
Let see.... a good name.... a good title... how about "Never end"? I mean, even after they died, those two keep running into each others arms. So that mean taht is a never ending story!
Come on!!!!!!!!!!!!! Give me something to read!!!!!!!! I'm an eager fan of this finda fics!!!!!!
Love kisses and wishes luck.
Your little pretty dark toy (^o^ You put me in a good mood!)
person DarkLotos
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAAT !!??????????????
WHAT KIND OF END WAS THAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jono is dead and Seth destroyed Egypt?????
You fucking ruined the story !!! Get your ass back here and make a happy end now! GOTH THAT!!!!!!!!
person shadow light
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!! This is a cute fanfic! I love Joey and Seto, especially in Egyptian times! Keep it up!
person dana
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story and can't wait to see how you continue it.
person shanghanjin
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry i haven't been reviewing your story lately. Your doing a fantastic job, please update soon. I want to know what happens to Seth and MY jou pup next.
person broken_wings
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please Please PLEASE update soon! I am begging here! *on her knees, pleading*. I want More!!!!!
Broken Wings
person Silverwolfe
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Seth was a bastard in the beginning, and bald xDDD. BUt the story is really good!! Please update soon!!!!