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Wow...I just finished reading the 38th chapter...Reading the whole fanfic took me a couple hours, but hey, it was worth it ^~. Really great fanfic you've got hear. Grammar, and mechanics all looked pretty good, and it has an excellent plot. Aten and Aria are just adorable, through the whole thing, and you characterized Malik, Marik, Bakura and Ryou wonderfully. *cough* Heh ^^; I LOVED what Marnd Bnd Bakura did to Steven, Jessica and co. It's what they deserved... *sighs* And now poor Ryou-chan has Aku to deal with...I hope everthing turns out okay. I can't wait until your next update!!!

-Cyn

Jasper:I relize my reviews are long.....hummmm oh well^^
Great chappie, Aku sounds kol *has a thing for bad guys* and Ryou seems a bit better in the memory department.
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Sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I just got back from visiting my fiance. *smiles* Congratulations to both of you! I am so happy for you two! I hope you guys are happy. Now for review. OMG! I thought all the threats were gone, and now Aku comes along. Why is this all happening to my poor sweet Ryou?? *hugs him* He better be ok!

YD: NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DD: Oh Gods!! Ryou!! NO!!
YD: Damn it! Damn it!!
DD: Baby, you'd BETTER make him all right!
YD: And yes, you may throw Anzu out of the plane over Maine...just make sure she DOES NOT land on OUR side of the border!!

Karen & LD: Mmmm Malik and Ryou *drooling*
Karen: *cough* Um, yeah. This is sad. I mean, it seems like it helped a bit for Ryou to win the duel, but Aku is just scary.
LD: Yamis created out of hate and anger are the best kind!
Karen: *glare*
LD: *shrinking away* or the worst...
Karen: Makes sense for it to be Malik, he was the one Ryou trusted right away... more or less. Yes, I think he'll do quite nicely *noding*
LD: *grinning* *I think he'll do it quite nicely too! *smirking*

poor Ryou, Having TWO yami's would be hard on his mentality. but you called 'It' Aku? where did you come up with that name because in a fic 'In the Guise of an Angel' that is Bakura's Ancient Egyptian name. Anywho, nice writting style

DD: SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YD: *rolls eyes* It's 6:30 in the Ra damned morning and she's been awake since 4:00
DD: It's Koi's fault! He was snoring again! *bounces up and down*
YD: How can you be so hyper on 3 hours sleep?
DD: It's called sleep deprivation. *swings from ceiling fan*
YD: *eyes DD* ANYways...I wanna see Ryou get some!!
DD: Oh, come on! The poor boy needs some help! *sigh* What we do to our fave bishies, huh, love? *thinks about how she's gonna torture Tris today*

Heather: Wai!! I love new chappy!!
Takira: Lemony goodness! I still say Bakura x Malik
Heather: XP And I saw Bakura x Ryou but usually we end up agreeing with Marik x Malik x Bakura x Ryou are a mix up of who is Seme's in that hole thing...
Takira: ::nods:: ^__^
Heather: Great chappy Bakurasgirl!! Hey have you ever been to www.witchtopia.com? Tis kind of funny but good also...Me and my friend Tak proved the voodoo and mind reading thing wrong...how? I just thought of another item and it didn't show it! MUWHAHAHA! ^____^ Can't wait till the next chapter but I won't get to read it till we get back on Thursday and even then I might not cause I'll be busy unpacking...so hopefully Friday!! ^__^ Hehe! Well ja ne for now and good luck on writing the next chapter!!

Aww! I'm happy for you! *squel* But i have 2 questions about the story. 1) Why does Ryou insist on biting people!? I gave that up weeks ago! 2) Are Ryou and Malik officially out of school or do they just not go?

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