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by Aten

person Falling Leaves
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^^ Lemon. Good. Lemon.

Ooooo... so how long will you be not updatingses?
person Falling Leaves
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*stares ahead blankly* ... no... noooo.... Noooooooooo! NONONONONONONONNONONONONONONONO!
Sakaji [muse #1]: Excuse her.
FL: No! NONONONONO! NOOOOOOOO! No damnit! Noo! Not Steven! NO! NOOOOO! NONONONONONONONONONONO!
Sakaji: Who here votes I kill her and get it over with?
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: LEMON LEMON LEMON!!
DD: I think what Dragon is TRYING to say is that Ryou could use a little love and reassurance.
YD: NO! I'm saying I WANT SEX!!
DD: *rolls eyes* Whase ise is new?
person Jacklyn Stone
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::shivers:: I've been reading all your stories, and I have to say, you're probably the best Ryou/Bakura writer I've ever seen... what is this, the fourth sequal??? I love the way you've written the characters... it's cool. I especially like Anz"Cut"Cuts and scrapes are like friendship!!!!"). Even though she's not quite like that in the show, she adds a nice comic relief. I like Malik, he's probably my fave (other than Bakura). Keep up the good work!!!!


Jacklyn (on ff.net as Ame no Mizu)
person Angel
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter ^_~ I also loved the other two to this series. You're totally good you know that? And thanks for the Isis plushie ^___^ *hands bakurasgirl Bakura and Ryou plushies*
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Ra! Steven just won't change will he? He's still a bastard and I still hate him. For the next chappie, I think it's time for a bit of lemony fluff! Oh, if you are wondering why I am so mad at Steven it's because I can kinda relate. My parents are bastards and don't accept me for who I am. People like that either need to be locked up or be shot. Heh....sorry for getting carried away....
person Lunara Moonbeam
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whhheeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! LEMON!!! LEMON!!!!!!!!!! LEMON!!!!!!!!!!
Augustin: LEMON!!!!! LEMON!!!!!! LEMON!!!!!!!
Claudius: The insane ones over there want the lemon.
I want a Marikpp and a Marikpop!
Tracey: *walks in* Chibi Neko Marik wants food. *holds up her arm to show Chibi Neko Marik hanging from her arm by his teeth*
Okay. I'll feed him. OH! Do you want Chibi Neko Bakura as a gift?
~Lunara~
person Mira-chan
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo... *growls at Steven, Jessica, and Tim while holding her Sennen Staff in a threatening position* Touch Ryou or the kids and DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And this is for your ploting!!! *starts beating all three with her Sennen Staff but stops when she hears her chibi silver fang, Chiisai Ookami wimpering and turns around to see whats going on*

ANZU: *nearly squeezing poor Chiiso deo death* Chibi duel monsters are like friendship!!! YEAH FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^________^

KIRIKO: AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET YOUR HANDS OFFA HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =_= *transforms to her full wolf form and attacks Anzu*

Oh my... _NEVER_ mess with a wolf and her adopted kid... OO

ANZU: Being... ouch... eaten... ow... is like... ouchies... FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH- ouch -FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_______^

SERI: *holding the scared chibi wolf* How dense can she be? ~_~;;;

*takes Chiisai from Seri* I dunno... Lets see if she servives Kiriko on a rampage... ^^;;;

CHIISAI: *yips and nods in agreement*

Kawaii!!! *huggles Chiisai lightly* ^__^ Anyway... *turns away as Kiriko starts to tear Anzu-baka's head of her neck* Awesome chappie Bakurasgirl-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____________________________^ Please continue soon!!!! ^_____________^
person Elys
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great! Frist i git a hug and now katanas and better yet steven to pratice on.^______^ i happy, and in my presonl opinion this is one of the greatist storys out there. hey do you think i could have anuz (i can't remeber how to spell that evil things name.) to pratice on and torcher. please! (gives athoross puppy eyes) pretty please.... I'll let you borow my Yami he's pretty cute. ( hey who says he has to be the same sex as me?) and he's good for all resons all except for being a evil yaoi hatting son of a BEEEEP!!!!! anyways great story and thanks for the katanas and steven and could i please have tea or what ever her name is, to try and kill even though it's proable imposable.please?
person Elys
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey i forgot to ask can i have a malikpop or marikpop or bakurapop or ryoupop or all four? hehehehehe and my yami thinks i still have some innocence left. hehehehehe.