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by Aten

person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor baby! I remember barney scaring the shit out of me. you jus brought back painful old memories.
person Keysha
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, poor YAMI!!! The Barney tape would have done me in, lol. And having to play doillies and dress up, CTFU. *grabs il ail and slams a Barney plushie into it, stabbing it repeatedly* DIE BARNEY DIE!!! *cough* sorry, lol.

POOR ARIA!!! Bakura is gonna kick his princely little ass wehn he gets back... it's gonna be ugly! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! You rock! Please add another chappie soon..I'm waiting on Yami's ass-kicking... I know he's gonna get one.
person Rhea
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aten...I hope he'll be okay. And those jerks, how could they take a sweetie like Aria? Especially since she makami ami play with her dolls.

And the reason Danae is in the hospital is because she was thrown against a wall by oneher her horses. Both of her legs were broken and her right knee cap was crushed. She'll live, but she may not be able to ride again, which is breaking her heart.

Anyway, I wonder how much trouble Yami will be in when Bakura finds out his daughts gos gone. That should be pretty amusing.
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really sorry that i havent reviewed in a while... I had new hours at work... well not really new.. just hard ones... I worked like three hours overtime in the past three days... yikes..

well anyway.. Your lemon was very beautiful! But I am hoping to get my piece of junk up and running soon!

Shelia
person Bluesummers
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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:O GRALNAK
person Lunara Moonbeam
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Urge to kill....Rising
Claudius: -.-; Mithos ate her Bakura plushie. Plus after reading that chapter, she wants to kill Tim and Jessica.
Augustin: *is on the floor crying due to the Barney stuff* MAKE IT STOP!!! MAKE IT STOP!!!!!!!! *cries*
Claudius: -.-; Help. I'm surrounded by the insane. And what shall happen in the next chapter?
Can I kill Steven, Tim, and Jessica? Please?
Augustin: Can you make the evil Barney stuff stop?
~Lunara~
person chibi koneko Mira-chan
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*takes Sennen Staff back* Tankies! =^_^=

SERI: Oooooooo... Evil ppl!!!! ~_~

KIRIKO:ds* ds* Poor little girl...

Hai! *bares her teeth at Tim and Jessica and hand the Sennen Staff over to Kiriko* Die!!!!!!!!!!! *attacks Tim anssicssica using her claws and fangs*

KIRIKO: *helps by beating them with the Staff* ^^

SERI: *shrugs and uses her fire to torch Anzu as there hasn't been any Anzu bashing for a couple of chappies*

TIM JESSICA AND ANZU: X_X

CHIISAI: *giggles*

YAMI KAI: *pokes his head in* You four havin' fun?

Hai! We is 'Ami!!! =^________^=

KIRIKO: Hey Kai! We're havin' tons of fun!

SERI: *nods*

YAMI KAI: Okay. See gir girls later. Oh! Meet me in my bedroom later when your back to normal, 'kay hikari dearest? *winks*

Otay! *hugs her yami*

CHIISAI: You gonna do something fun later Mira-chan? *tilts head*

Yup! =^____________________________^=

KIRIKO: *under her breath* Lemon...

SERI: *heard Kiri and snickers*

Anyway... Sugoii chappie!!! =^________^= Me can't _WAIT_ fow mowe!!! =^____________^= Oh! Befowe me fowgets!!! Me got another pwesant fow yous Batuwasgirl!!! *hands a Bakurasgirl a long metal poll with the names Steven, Tim and Jessica writen on it in permanet ink* =^________^=

SERI: We think you can guess what that's for... And you get to keep that... ^____________^

Yup!!! =^____________________________^= *dashes off with her muses right behind her*
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: OOOOO...Steven's on the hunt!
YD: Asshole! Can I kill him? PLEASE?!?!?
DD: Dragon's feeling very violent the last couple of days...she's...ummm...."frusterated".
YD: So are YOU hikari!
DD: I admit to nothing!!
person lupusdragon
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Waaah! Aten is sick and Steven is going to get him and Aria.
LD: Hmmm Aten is really sensative, I wonder, does he sense what is going on around him?
Karen: That is a good question. More updates!
person Lunara Moonbeam
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grabs her katana* Can we kill Steven now? And you can flaunt your ring all you want! It doesn't matter to me!
Augustin: *grabs his sword* What does Steven have against gays?
Claudius: *throws both Lunara and Augustin Seto and Bakura plushies* No killing Steven. He's needed for the rest of the story.
*snuggles her Bakura plushie* Urge to kill fading... AuguAugustin: *snuggles his Seto plushie* Urge to hump Seto rising... ^^
Claudius: *sighs* Can you deal with these two for me bakurasgirl? They're making me go insane.
~Lunara~