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for Anything for You

by Aten

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: ASSHOLE!! *stabs Steven in the eye with her M. Pencil
DD: I can't believe it!!
YD: Boys, Yami got an ass kicking!
DD: He needed one!
YD: Good to see you back on line chickie!
DD: Yeah!
person Falling Leaves
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff, cry, whimper, cry, cry, sniff* Damn you... how can you write cuteness and sadness at the same time!?
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't know wheter it's you or the onions cooking in the kitchen but something is making me cry! My god, put a happy chapter in.
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Steven is such an ass. I just wanna slap him!!! The last part of the chappie got me crying. It's just so sad. Bakura just has to find Ryou! He just has to!
person chibi koneko Mira-chan
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweven evwil!!!!! *glares at Steven*

YAMI KAI: *is sitting on the floor with chibi koneko Mirakai on his lap* I have to agree with you there hikari dearest. *bashes the bad guys(and girl) with the Sennen Staff*

*giggles then turns around and hugs her yami* =^^=

KIRIKO: You never took your presant Bakurasgirl! =Oo=;;;

CHIISAI: =Oo=;;;

SERI: *offers the long metal poll to Bakurasgirl again* Take it this time... LOLz

*giggles* Me wuv dis ficcie so faw Batuwasgirl!!! =^_________________^= Me can't wait fow mowe!!! =^_________^=
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:pulls out a gun and levels it with Steven's head: LET THEM GO YOU SORRY BASTARD!!! YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE TO BE A LOVING AND SUPPORTIVE FATHER AND YOU BLEW IT!
person Keysha
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*loads up the Tek-9 and aims it at Steven* BAKAYARO!!! *starts capping, busting slugs in Steven's ass* YOU BRING MY WHITE HAIRED BISHIE BACK!!! That asshole took Ryou and his kids...that sick fuck. Ymai's got on helluva ass beating coming to him..I can't wait!! *tee hee* I love this story, and it gets better with every chappie!!

'Always remain true to yourself.'

You're Awesome.

Keysha
person Falling Le̦ a
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*screams and hides under computer desk, clutching onto Malik card deck for her life*
*whimper*
Stupid
Plan
Stupid
Doll
Stupid
... People
person Heather Sutaki
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- ::cough hack wize:: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
DA
DAMN YOU STEVEN!! ::frowns:: They took Aria! THEY TOOK ARIA!! NOOO! ::Death glares Yami and begins beating the crap out of him:: HOW COULD YOU NOT WATCH HER!! HOW COULD YOU!! YOU SHOULD HAVE FORGOTTEN THE PHONE AND WATCHED HER!! DAMN YOU TO HELL AND BACK AGAIN!!! ::twitch twich:: ::sighs:: Well now that is out of my system! ^___^ Great chapter again Bakurasgirl! ¬¬ And that doesn't help much...for all I know it could be anyone! How in the world am I going to find a boy who write yaoi fiction and knows you....::sighs:: hehe! Dang, hey...hope you know that Yugioh Bakura's Battle City Group for MSN has moved...I belive your a member of it, right? Well they moved it cause of certain problems...just joined the new one..hehe ^_______^!! Well ja ne for now and keep it up with the chapters!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: They took Ryou too?
YD: I didn't think it'd go down that way.
DD: Yami's going to get a beating down!
YD: Oh yeah!