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Heather: GO ATEN!! ::wishes she could learn to read and write glyphs as well:: ^___^ Well at least there almost there! And it is good to hear your computer's working out good! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I am to immpatient, I know! I mean....your updates, and sometimes other occasional updates by Liz, Hato-chiisai, Cat, SSJ Sky, and all them are good also, but I love to read your story a lot!! ^______________^ Keep it up! MUWAHAHAHAHAHA!! I swear, Steven will pay!!! I must see it go out!! ::frowns:: Ryou, come on!! You can hold on awhile longer! There almost there!!!

O_____O!!! DAMN YOU STEVEN!! YOU SADISTIC LITTLE HENTAI SOB ASSHOLE FUCKING BASTARD!!! I WILL HAVE YOUR HEAD!!! Or well...Bakura and Marik will..^__^ I say mutalate his body! Cut the fools nuts off! Then do what they did in egypt! Cut his tounge off, scramble and pull out his brains through his noise! Make him suffer that ultimate punishment!! Burn his body! Slice it, dice it, and force it down Tim's and Jessica's throughts!! MUWAHAHAH! @_@ Erm...gomen nasi! I sometimes get into the hole thing a little to much...Just make sure Steven gets the roughest punishment ever!! But make it look like suicide..Marik can control TIm and Jessica and make it look like Steven killed himself or they killed him instead....^_____^ Bakura, Marik! Get your asses over there quick!! ::grins:: Great chapter, as usuall! hehe Can't wait till tomorrow! How's the computer problems doing? Got them fixed yet? ^__^ ja ne

thanks for your encaragement i think thats what i want to say about my now passed away booy friend do youave a email addres. I like this storie it going well. One question tough can't the milliom necklce techanly find where Ryou isat I though may be if you could look back in tme at a ertian point but what do I no . alos It should be easy t fid tht jerk steve . ad hi drunk cuisn its a small town and theres salwys soebody thatnoknow somebody tat might not like him and hilp the to Yamies out thanks see ya I know that probaly sounds strang .

*cries while looking at her MANY pictures of Ryou* NOT THE HAIR!!!!! WHY DID YOU CUT THE HAIR?!!! WHY?!!!
Claudius: *looks pissed* Steven is SO dead! Men can havng hng hair! All bishis have long hair! *grabs his sword and chases after Steven*
Steven: O.O *runs*
Augustin: *has Tim pinned to the floor and is trying to stab him* SCREAM FOR ME IDIOT!!! SCREAM FOR ME!!!! *maniacal laugh*
*sniffle* Can't you bring back Ryou's long hair? I loved the hair! Why did you have the hair cut? Didn't you love his long hair?
~Lunara~

LD: Ok, that was all messed up.
Karen: ;_; They cut Ryoupretpretty haire *wails*
LD: Poor Aten, he is so sweet, too sweet to have to be subjected to that.
Karen: Anat wat was up with the cops? You'd think they would be a little more serious about finding Ryou with SKaibKaiba involved. That was kinda creepy.
LD: Please let Marik and Bakura find them soon. *sniffles*

great story.

DD: *Offers M. Pencil to Marik to remove Steven's eyes* Here ya go, baby.
YD: Just make sure you clean the gunk off it when you're done...I have to live in that thing you know.
DD: Hey Bakurasgirl? I can't find the key to the handcuffs!
YD: Yeah...I'm gonna have to pick the lock now! *snicker* *wink*
DD:uessuess we'll have to go shopping. *big grin*

That was great . and thak fr answerin me . I havean idea for torture if you want I know in some cultures tey would skin them alive and rb salt into them The Apaches i think like to do that and after they did that they wold stretch you out freal tigth with wet raw hide and when the sun came up it would dri and srink pulling the person apart . but theres no desart out there impeling them is good then ten there is the romans crusifying thats the worst form of torture because it strns the whole body. I thougt id give yousome ideas I hav been sudyn ancient cultures for a while . I hope you didn't mind

Karen: They will find Ryou, they will find Ryou...
Loor oor Ryou. Aten is so sweet and he sacrificed him self for the little boy. He is such a good parent *bawls*
Karen: I think this is by far the saddest of these stories. But it is really good too.^_^

You should let us vote on how he dies! That'll make it more fun!
Claudius: es bes back covered in blood* Well that fun!fun!
Augustin: You killed someone didn't you?
Claudius: A few people who wanted to help Steven cut my hair. But I disposed of them! Steven got away. Damn bastard! I shall make him pay for the ruining of bishi hair!
Augustin: And they call me psycho. u.u
Can we start giving Bakura and Marik weapons now? I have some they would like! *hands Bakura Sephiroth's Masamune and Marik Vincent's Ultamite Weapon, Death Penalty* Enjoy!
~Lunara~