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for Shattered

by WatarisGirl

person Kitt
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:D *collects sap*
person Kitt
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey cool, I got a shout out XD; ^^;
Heheh. Love the littomicomic releif there - Tris & Ryou lol
person Kitt
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooo suspense :D~!

I like how IC this is, but yet moves them to believabley ( is that a word XD;?) changing for the better. And I love your version of Tea ^^v!

Also, I think you're right on the brother thing ( taken from http://trytowish.cjb.net/ )

" Family: ? I don't know anything about his direct family, but he has a dog and a nephew! So he has to have some sort of sibling. He says so in the manga! Well I have the french version but basically he says: "He's a kid who's insupportable and not cute at all, but if his life were in danger i would do anything to help him! There'd have to bway!way!" Tristan is really a sweet guy. Ok that's kinda mean... but it's still so cute! "
person lupusdragon
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: For as depressing as this started, it is turning out really touching and sweet.
LD: Psh, I bet the sad stuff isn't done yet... unless the story is almost over.
Karen: And we don't want the story to be almost done! More more more!
LD: Please keep writing.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: moremoremoremoremoremoremore!!
YD: What my hikari is trying to say is, please write the next chapter soon!
person Kitt
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_o what about Shizuka...eeeppp...
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Well, I'd flip if Bakura took my bike too.
JoeyJoey and Tris are ssooo sweet!!
YD: Can't wait for more of this story!
DD: Please update again soon!!
person lupusdragon
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Aww, Bakura and Ryou are so sweet. They kidnapped for Joey. Tristan needs to calm down.
LD: No sense in getting cought up in 'what ifs'
Karen: Mm hmm. But Tea consipiring with Bakura and Ryou, that is great! This is so great!
LD: Hehe and Serenity and Joey are gald thier dad is dead! Hehe. Update soon! So much fun!
person lupusdragon
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: ;_; Poor Joey. That is so sad. He has no family left.
LD: Damn, love the heavy angst! *pats Karen on the back * It is ok, he has his friends. I am sure Kaiba wouldn't mind taking in a stray for a while *smirks *
Karen: Oh, be nice.
LD: I was.
Karen: Hmph. Good chapter. More soon!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Awww...poor Tris! *hugs Tris plushie*
YD: Glad Joey's SOB of a father is dead!
DD: Me too!
YD: Please update again soon!!

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