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for Shattered

by WatarisGirl

person koalared
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic! I know it's been awhile since you wrote it, but wanted to let you know. This was one of the first fics I read that I liked Jou/Tristan together, The way you wrote it made me feel all the angst and joy that Jou was going thru. You should write more. Thankyou
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Gods! That was...gods!
YD: I know. Wow.
DD: Damn those two are so made for each other.
YD: Mm-hmm. We REALLY loved this story.
DD: I'm just sorry it's over.
person lupusdragon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Awww, Tristan is so sweet! Sugar coated Tristan! Sugared lemons, get your sugared lemons here!
LD: That was astounding! Impossibly good. Yay!
person bakurasgirl
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*goes to take a cold shower* Oh my god..that was too hot...chappie 10..oh dear ra....*grabs bakura and runs into supply closet*
person Kitt
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
;_; wah, it's over. Oh well. Nice last chappter. Heheh...I thought Jou would hit Tris XD;;;
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: *squeals* Tris' mom is SO cool!!
YD: Yeah, and Joey and Tris are so cute together.
DD: Okay, now even I'M getting anxious for a lemon.
YD: *eyes glaze overmm..mm...lemon...
person lupusdragon
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Ah, I love considerate parents. Hehe though I am not sure how I would react if MY mom ever told me just to let her know if I needed some privacy with my lover. Probably the same way Tristan did.
LD: Um, you don't have a lover.
Karen: *glaring * That is NOT the point.
LD: Oh yeah, the point is that this is a wonderful story. I love how you render the characters. I can totally see Joey being an drawer.
Karen: So sweet. More please! I want a sugar high!
LD: And I want some Sprite ^_^
Karen: Insatiable yaoi fangirl.
LD: Right back at ya.
person Kitt
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh. That's how I feel when I draw...
person lupusdragon
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Kawaii! It was beautiful sap *_*
LD: Meh, It was good. I feel bad for Seto. He was so strong the whole time. Mokuba is such a great little brother.
Karen: Joey and Tristan are so cute. Hehe, Tristan orgasmed twice and no one even _touched_ him! He really does love Joey if just being with him does that.
LD: Hehehe, you sound like me!
Karen: Eh, so what. Another great chapter! There is more, right?
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: *sobs* That was SOOO sweet!!
YD: *hands DD tissue* It was...poor Joey. Gonna be a while, huh?
DD: Well geeze Dragon! You try having sex with broken ribs!
YD: *rolls eyes*
DD: Can't wait for the next chapter. This story is so great! *glomps author*