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for Deep Desires

by Lechan

person smint45
schedule May 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
and another great ficlett!!! Too bad this is the last one I would have loved to see some seto joey smutt^^ Thank you so much for the post!!!
person Kiochii
schedule December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with your stories. All of them. Seriously I have read (without realizing it until now) almost all of your stories and was on pins and needles the whole time. I personally vote for a Seto Joey romance (Joey uke because I have a hard time swallowing him as a seme all puns intended) lol cant wait for the next installment. Also what no Marik and Malik? XD lol cant wait for the next one. Would love to see how much trouble Yami is in when Yugi knows fully that he was watched having some intimate times. hehe~
person fireandicpixie
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for ythe jou/seto chappie. lovin this series.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you did them well keep trying and you'll get it. you may try reading Rings that Bind the author is great at writing Ryou Bakura and she writes long long stuff it awesome ~>.<. Yay sex on the beach....need to try that
J-chan
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok this 'snipit' was AWESOME in every sense of the word. sooo SOOO yummy! absolutely beautiful, and you wrot eit just fine!
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the snippet.
person Sy Ke
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^______________________^ Loved it. LOVED it.
person LonelyDove89
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was just perfect ^_^
person dip
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eh, is it just me or does the title seem a little bit cliche'? lol any ways, i loved the yaoi scene in this and the ending had me laughing like crazy. Yuugi needs to get him back for that. He even called him Atemu. Now we 'know' he was real pissed lol >3 as far as the joey/seto i would love to read one from you. I think i stated that a while back in a review on a different story, so by now you should have enough votes ne? =3 all thou... I don't mean sound desperate but... I'm dying for an update to MOSAL. It's killin' me -_< But i'm being a good patient faithful reader. It's hard but i'll manage =3
person LY37
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sigh!!! I am soooo very happy you are continuing with the Heart of the Ocean (HOTO) snippets. HOTO is by far my absolute favorite Yaoi, Slash, or fanfiction story that I've ever read. And I have read plenty. Also your writing is the best out there. Your writing is glorifyingly superb. Please more HOTO snippets. Lemon or non-lemon - they are great. I loved the lemon with Yami and Yugi. I just love those two, especially their personality, life and love in your HOTO story. Can't get enough of them in that Au story. Will you do a snippet that is just Yami and Yugi? Their love and life in and out of the water? Yes?! And yes, yes to a Seto / Jou snippet. Will you do a Malik and Marik snippet as well? I hope I don't sound too demanding. I just love HOTO and want to prolong and savor your delicious telling as much as possible. Thank you so much for writing this AU. Are you a professional writer? You sure write like one - plots, tension, depth, and full character personality - Heart Of The Ocean has it all. You spin a great yarn. Thanks for sharing you most definitely wonderful talent.

P.S. I do have a question. Yami said Bakura is his cousin. Is Bakura as old as Yami is this story? Or does Yami just realize that Bakura is a reincarnation of his long ago cousin Bakura? Just curious.