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Can't wait til the next chap! When you add to this do you think you can send me an email with the web address to let me know? My email is PotionsPet@tidni.com.

It was cool. Yay. Update soon ^^

So cruel you are! Making Bakura realize what he was missing when it is quite possiblity too late. Ryou acting like Bakura, or even colder than Bakura, is just... well... wrong... on so many levels. Ryou breaks down and craves Bakura's touch. It was bittersweet; however, since Ryou, as much as he may want to, just can't trust Bakura. And who can blame him? Your story takes yet another step in a completely different direction. Ryou has a few days to be himself... to relax and not to have to constantly be on his guard and yet... as much as he may have liked the idea of it, as much as he may have liked the first day or two of peace and (too much) quiet, he began to realize that he missed his other half. That is a very scary revelation. When Bakura returned and asked for help with the groceries, I was sort of shocked by Ryou's reaction. My he has turned into the little Ice Prince, hasn't he? The note he left behind for Bakura on the inedible mock "poisonous" meal was rather cruel, too. Ryou = Bakura Lite, I'm tellin' ya! Great story, love! Keep it up!

I like where this is going. It's interesting that Bakura found his heart as Ryou buried his. I hope you will continue this.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! WANT MORE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!

This chapter made me think of my aunt's cooking...her and Bakura are in the same boat. It was funny though.

Oh, my... Ryou put the smackdown on Bakura for a change! You go, Ryou baby! "Let me be!" Ryou ought to have that phrase tatooed somewhere... but I digress... We see in the newest chapter the harm that Bakura has inflicted on his light and how Ryou has detached himself emotionally from not just Bakura and the dark one's abuse about everything else as well. I hope Bakura is proud of himself! Bastard! He broke the light... his light! Ryou has become cold, clinical, calculated, and uncaring... Bakura Lite. And, Bakura stuck around after being stuck like a pig by his "weakling" light? Can't wait to see what happpens next! Very nicely done, my dear!

Good Start. I'm looking forward to more.

Wow! Dedicated to MOI? I'm humbled, my dear... And, I also feel like a dolt for not having read your story sooner and leaving you a love note! I'm happy that you decided to post your story! What is not to love about Ryou and Bakura? And, yes, your Bakura is definitely one badass who likes to cut Ryou bad... make him bleed. Poor Ryou... but, it seems that Mssr. Ryou has grown a backbone! He has taken levels of self defense courses and is ready to inflict some pain on the normal aggressor... Gooooooooo, RYOU! I don't like that Ryou's eyes are so cold and hard... no life in those chocolate beauties... you must bring life forth! You must! Ryou must be love... clouds... and fluffy cuteness! Don't turn him into a ruthless fuck like Bakura! NOOOOOOOOOOO! And where the hell is the man smut you promised??? ; ) JUST kidding! Great start, my love! Keep going... I'll keep reading... And, I just might review... o.O smooches!

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