rate_review Reviews

Truly wonderful work I must say. My goodness my favorite part of this whole story is when Seto is getting attacked by the squid and Joey is like “WHY is there a squid” or something like that. I had to walk away from the computer because I was laughing so hard. I loved the whole, blowing the heads up. I loved that about your story, and the way you made Joey talk. I caught myself laughing so much I kind of chocked a few times.

You are very talented at writing and I would be honored to read more stories by you. I hope you update soon as well. I can’t wait for the next chapters. I really do hope Seto stops being a total ass hole. :)

Aww. don't end it there! Is Jou going to end up in the sea at the end because I can't see either of them really folding. I mean Jou has a life friends and a sister. Would he really give it all up just for some guy he argues with him alot? Even though it is Seto. And would Seto go after him. like if he got up and left on a plane with out telling him?......well update soon

Beautifully written, very detailed, definatly a story worth reading twice ;p
I love the plot and its my favorite pairing!!! Awsome story, cant wait for the next chapter! XD

hey what's 'other' mean? and what just happened? dose this mean jou must go back with seto after they find mokie? eekk!

holy crap wow it's really good can't whait for the next instalment!...chapter ......wow i'm a loser.instalment?...right, update soon

man, keep om writing in the free world

i like it. And since i am the only one in the entire world who matter, i say continue. (What an ego, huh?)

This story is absolutely captivating! Very original. I can’t believe this story doesn’t have more reviews; it’s a crime I tell you… Update soon, please! It’s been a long time since I’ve read a story that has had me on the edge of my seat and wanting more.

OMG THIS IS THE BEST FUCKIN STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!I love it its original and cool .Where he says hes a siren and the blood pouring ,....COOL!!!!!!PLZcontinue it don't do i cliffie like that again!!!??!!
BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i likey cant wait to hear more