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Ok, since when did AU fanfiction become amazing? I mean, seriously. Merman Kaiba? Usually not my first choice, but this story swept me off my feet. By the way, researching, I found out Kaiba means Hippocampus, which is also awesome, but you probably knew that already.
Loved the cameos, and this sentence:
"I don't even know his favorite color."
It was so... pretty.
Also, I was half expecting, if it came down to Joey choosing to go with Kaiba, a merman Duke Devlin would appear and fall for Shizuka so she could go too. Haha. But I like this way better.
What else... oh yeah, fabulous story!

Okay, I seem to have mixed up Japanese and American names. Again.



Oh well.

THIS IS GREAT!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! i love the quote "he kisses me. Then i punch his dumb ass in the face for not being Kaiba!" that was amazing!! i love this story!!!!! thanks so much!!!!!!!!

Great story! I am happy that Seto has been able to come back to the human world. He did that for Jou^^ that's so sweet.

NO! No stop playing! He came to land just to be with him! Why would he leave him now?! And Jou could finish up school and then go back with him. Even if his parents won't accept him, shizuka would understand, and he could still visit. Kaiba said he could fix the unable to breathe under water thing! I REFUSE to accept this chapter, despite the sexy siren lemon. They live happily ever after. Period. *Is stubborn* :P

Omg! I loved this story! And now there's more! That was great! (if slightly detailed... But whatever) Great!

Yay! I love a happy ending. Great job on the story. It's one of the best I've ever read.

that was so cute! it was the cutest thing i've ever read!!! i love it!!! you're amzing!!!! *hugs* this story was so good!!!

please don't be the end.. one more chapter maybe with a lemon ;). i like how possessive seto is. HOT!

Cant wait for you to update...this story is really good and I can picture it all in my head....its a well written idea....